Character Sprite Front, Back & Side View

Started by Tenacious Stu, Sat 20/11/2010 04:32:30

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Tenacious Stu






I've been working on these sprite views and wanted some feedback, opinions.

Sorry about the large image. Thanks in advance for any help  :)

Tabata

Hello Tenacious Stu,

I think, it's pretty well done. Is it a character for Jericho Jones?

Just a little thing about the (nearly) side-view:
The left arm and foot seem to be a bit strange. I think, the arm is a bit too short (it should be shorter, as the right one, but it seems too much imo).
The foot must not have a change, but if it is possible to do, it would be the other way around (imo only a little bit smaller, than the right one, which is in front - the form is fine).

Maybe try it and look, what you like most, because primarily, it should please yourself.

Tenacious Stu


Thanks for your helpful comments, Tabata

Quote from: Tabata on Sat 20/11/2010 17:13:02

I think, it's pretty well done. Is it a character for Jericho Jones?


How on Earth do you know about Jericho Jones? 'Jericho Jones and the Wild West Quest' was a Demo I made for a module at University earlier this year. I received a 'B', but the Demo wasn't that great in my own opinion. I may resurrect the idea sometime in the future for a full game.

If you are interested the Demo can be found here .

But to answer your question, no, this character is for a new project. Now on to your critique...  :)

Quote from: Tabata on Sat 20/11/2010 17:13:02
Just a little thing about the (nearly) side-view:
The left arm and foot seem to be a bit strange. I think, the arm is a bit too short (it should be shorter, as the right one, but it seems too much imo).
The foot must not have a change, but if it is possible to do, it would be the other way around (imo only a little bit smaller, than the right one, which is in front - the form is fine).

I agree with you that the arm is too short, on the side view, will definitely take this on board ;)

I'm not sure what you're saying about the feet though, do you mean that you would have the right foot facing outwards and the left made smaller?

Thanks again for the advice  :P

Tabata

Quote from: Tenacious Stu on Sat 20/11/2010 17:43:59
How on Earth do you know about Jericho Jones? 'Jericho Jones and the Wild West Quest' was a Demo I made for a module at University earlier this year. I received a 'B', but the Demo wasn't that great in my own opinion. I may resurrect the idea sometime in the future for a full game.

hi, hi, hi - thanks to www - call me Sherlock  ;)

Quote from: Tenacious Stu on Sat 20/11/2010 17:43:59
I'm not sure what you're saying about the feet though, do you mean that you would have the right foot facing outwards and the left made smaller?

Sorry, but my english isn't the very best, so I stumbeling around sometimes while trying to explain something.

It's only the left foot, (same side, as the „short“ arm).
And I have to say, that I don't have the skills to know, if it is possible to do such a small change in the resolution of this pic.
The form is very well and the direction is also okay, only the size could be a little bit smaller (you now the thingy about: the far away, the smaller - and that is only a little bit here).
But I'd like to repeat: This change is not really necessarily imo. Depends on what is possible and how it looks after that.

Looking forward to your new project.  :)

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