Promotional "Film"

[evenwolf]

and could really use some understatements rather than ensuring that even a 4 year old will be able to follow.

I m sorry if this came across as harsh

Not at all.  Frankly, I didn't understand a word of it.  Try again?

[loominous]

"and could really use some understatements rather than ensuring that even a 4 year old will be able to follow" the plot.

Clear enough for you?

[evenwolf]

So you're talking about the music score? Otherwise I'm at a loss at what I was so obvious about.Ã,  There really isn't too much of a plot in this movie I'm afraid.

I think you'll find that the music had less to do with helping the audience understand the story but rather it attempts more on the side of humor and aesthetics, both of which you appear to be on the counter-culture side of.

Perhaps you could score a version yourself and give me a better idea what would be acceptable?  Or reshade the film frame by frame?

[Esseb]

But also I think the visual would help.  Rather than a character exclaiming these things... what if we see the image in their head of what they'd do with the room?  The bar transforms into a giant editing bay, for example.

Now that's another thing entirely. I like that idea.