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From left to right: the progress I've made over the past year. I only want critiquing on the last one, but I wanted to show what he's been through.
The character himself is a farm-boy-turned-prince, or the other way around. He is 18 years old.
As far as I'm concerned, it's done, unless you all think otherwise. If not, then I'll start working on other views.
I dont know if the cloak is shaded enough.
Beside that, nothing is wrong, maybe only the shape of his head, but that might be ok.
"nothing is wrong"? That's a pretty bold statement :=
For starters, the cloak defies gravity.
His chest isn't connected to the shoulders, the ears are too high up, the eyes are too white, the skin tone is a bit too orange, ...
And the head is too big compared to the body.
@Oliwerko: Thank you. I don't have very much experience at this, and cloth folds are my weak point. I'll have to do some more research.
@KhrisMUC
Thank you for pointing all that out. Especially about the skintones.
(http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/3417/wulf2sb3.png)
Defies gravity? I guess I didn't make it clear that it is hanging from his shoulders, I'm sorry, my mistake.
Chest not connected? I suppose that would be the highlighting on the shoulders, if not, please elaborate.
About the head, I don't know what else to do about that other than redrawing it completely. I hate doing that.
Ok, I'll elaborate:
-The cloak's left and right sides don't fall down straight; they look like they're held by somebody chrouching behind the guy.
-His chest looks more like boobs. Raise the bottom of the pecs and connect them to the shoulders. (reference: http://www.innerbody.com/image/musfov.html)
-About the head: well, then I suggest to redraw it completely.