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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Evil on Sun 27/04/2003 02:35:22

Title: Man with pike line-art
Post by: Evil on Sun 27/04/2003 02:35:22
I dont like the way it turned out. I tried putting a breastplate on him and it turned out bad. Can someone help me with a breastplate or help make the shirt look a little better. Another thing i need help with is the boots with the pant overhang.

(http://www.geocities.com/lobsterswithlasers2/pikeguy2.GIF)
(http://invis.free.anonymizer.com/http://www.geocities.com/lobsterswithlasers2/pikeguy2.GIF)
Title: Re:Man with pike line-art
Post by: Neole on Sun 27/04/2003 09:05:43
I love it the way it is! Boots and pants look fine, the breastplate might make a good addition, but I'm not sure.
Title: Re:Man with pike line-art
Post by: Evil on Tue 29/04/2003 01:02:33
Well here is an update. I dont like it much but what do you think? Worthy of a game? Edits are highly welcome...
(http://www.geocities.com/lobsterswithlasers2/pikealmost.gif)
(http://invis.free.anonymizer.com/http://www.geocities.com/lobsterswithlasers2/pikealmost.gif)
Title: Re:Man with pike line-art
Post by: on Tue 29/04/2003 02:17:32
Evil it looks great,it realy does.
maybe try and give the boots some souls (i'm not sure thats how you spell it..i mean the bottom of the shoe). and maybe try and tuck the pants inside the boots instead of them over flowing above them.
but i think you can totaly leave it the way it is.
well i hope you understood what i ment and that i helped a bit.
Title: Re:Man with pike line-art
Post by: n3tgraph on Tue 29/04/2003 14:32:33
hey evil I tried some armour
and changed his colour to a bit browner. His skin looked like a nobleman's skin

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/pikeguy.gif)
Title: Re:Man with pike line-art
Post by: Neole on Tue 29/04/2003 17:00:48
Looking rather good! He looks like a chinese warrior (pale skin and all). The white shirt was looking a bit out of place but N3T's armour corrects that. The armour could be shaded the way you've done the helmet.