Thoughts on this track, anyone?

[djres]

I put together this little track while I was in Amsterdam over the weekend.  It's a little weird, and I just wanted to get some reactions to see if it just amused me or if anybody actually liked it.  Opinions and criticisms are welcome.

http://www.mediafire.com/?5xgrqnzstni

[Nikolas]

Mixed emotions here.

Begining with the weir guitary sound, is rather industrial at sound.

Kick is awfully disco/popish. Canned cheering and audience doesn't seem to work greatly!

Don't know what to make of it. I suppose it is kinda funny the weird kind of funny...

Well as time progresses I can see it getting better and better, dancable maybe, clubable as well. Yup! This works after all (this said after 1:30 or something)...

Cheers for sharing

[djres]

What do you mean canned cheering?  That was live!

Anyway, thanks for the detailed critique, Nik!  Danceable isn't precisely what I was going for but hey, I'll take it.  I see what you mean about the beginning, it was out of whack, so I tweaked it a bit.  Hopefully this makes it work together a little better.

Here is the new one:

http://www.mediafire.com/?2hmx9mcbyjx