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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: taryuu on Sat 19/07/2003 18:16:08

Title: More scenes from Summer Paradise
Post by: taryuu on Sat 19/07/2003 18:16:08
Allright here they are, keep in mind this is for a 320X200 game and the total number of colours in it can't be more than 256.

(http://wolfz.com/~storage/taryuu/trailerpark-jul.png)
(http://wolfz.com/~storage/taryuu/house-jul.png)

(http://wolfz.com/~storage/taryuu/jenniferc-%20jul.png)
(http://wolfz.com/~storage/taryuu/Adrianna.png)
(http://wolfz.com/~storage/taryuu/Satoru-jul.png)

comments and criticism very welcome, and don't be afraid to eidt any of these yourself.  thanks for your time!
Title: Re:More scenes from Summer Paradise
Post by: Barcik on Sat 19/07/2003 18:53:10
Ooh, lovely detail.
Title: Re:More scenes from Summer Paradise
Post by: Minimi on Sat 19/07/2003 18:54:18
very nice artwork, nice characters, nice detail in grass and palmtrees far away, though 1 thing!

The red caravan, is really flat, and ugly, the line from the wheel to the other one looks like this : ~~~~~~~ and should be ________
So, just make some dept in the caravan, and for the rest, I really like it!
Title: Re:More scenes from Summer Paradise
Post by: TheDude on Sat 19/07/2003 19:16:39
Yeah everything looks great except for the flat red caravan.
Title: Re:More scenes from Summer Paradise
Post by: Synthetique on Sat 19/07/2003 19:20:49
i think it's supposed to be flat.. great pic..
Title: Re:More scenes from Summer Paradise
Post by: Gonchi on Sat 19/07/2003 19:24:09
The shadow of the gray caravan is pretty flat too, you can tell if you look bellow the gas thing in the back.
Title: Re:More scenes from Summer Paradise
Post by: Neole on Sun 20/07/2003 09:31:19
I rather like these! Looking forward to the game.
Title: Re:More scenes from Summer Paradise
Post by: Rincewind on Sun 20/07/2003 10:26:47
Yeah, this looks great - I especially love that palm tree in the first picture - Excellent work!  
Title: Re:More scenes from Summer Paradise
Post by: Nacho on Sun 20/07/2003 11:59:06
You must make it clear to us Taryuu... Is the caravan flat? Is it part of a scenario or something?

I would add some icons in the long take in the caravans background... Mountains? Buildings? It should give more deep to the image. You may try also to sue darker greens.
Title: Re:More scenes from Summer Paradise
Post by: Jimi on Sun 20/07/2003 18:22:30
I like it, but yes, the caravans look like carboard cut outs.
Title: Re:More scenes from Summer Paradise
Post by: taryuu on Mon 21/07/2003 02:42:42
so everything else is perfect?  just the trailer park?

how's this?
(http://wolfz.com/~storage/taryuu/trailerpark-ju3.png)

as compared to the original?

(http://wolfz.com/~storage/taryuu/trailerpark-jul.png)
Title: Re:More scenes from Summer Paradise
Post by: Neole on Mon 21/07/2003 05:18:07
Mucho better. And still great looking.
Title: Re:More scenes from Summer Paradise
Post by: Gonchi on Mon 21/07/2003 07:22:47
Oh yes, that's much better.

I'll be looking forward to this one.
Title: Re:More scenes from Summer Paradise
Post by: Synthetique on Mon 21/07/2003 19:26:07
(http://wolfz.com/~storage/taryuu/trailerpark-ju3.png)
This is the old one

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/trailerpark-ju3cv.png)
This is my edit.. it points out a few things..
Title: Re:More scenes from Summer Paradise
Post by: Czar on Tue 22/07/2003 00:04:20

The office now looks better, but i think you could still adjust the floor( i mean the line conecting the weels)....
Anyway nice pics
Title: Re:More scenes from Summer Paradise
Post by: Nostrum on Tue 22/07/2003 04:13:04
This game looks like it's gonna kick some major arse. The graphics are pretty stylish... are we gonna get a demo any time soon? Or the full game even?
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