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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: eternal_renegade on Thu 19/07/2007 09:22:56

Title: Mr.Elf and Notebook
Post by: eternal_renegade on Thu 19/07/2007 09:22:56
Alright, well here are a couple things I made. I am looking for criticism. I am just trying to get better at this sort of thing!


(http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b74/eternal_renegade/Elf.gif)

(http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b74/eternal_renegade/Elf.gif)




(http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b74/eternal_renegade/Book.gif)

(http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b74/eternal_renegade/Book.gif)
Title: Re: Note Book
Post by: Nacho on Thu 19/07/2007 09:34:52
I don' t really get it... There are some flaws from the point of view of isometric rules, but you say you are aware... Why don' t you publish your finished work in the first step? You say there are shape problems... do you want us to point them, or not?

I would also advice to do some easy things, like doing the corners in a lighter colour, like in the gif (image 6, for instance):

(http://www.idigitalemotion.com/tutorials/guest/pixel/2.jpg)

But I don' t want if you want this to be criticised or not... I would recommend to re-phrase your post, my friend.
Title: Re: Mr.Elf and Notebook
Post by: eternal_renegade on Thu 19/07/2007 10:28:26
Sorry about my weird post before, so yeah there you go!
Title: Re: Mr.Elf and Notebook
Post by: cobra79 on Thu 19/07/2007 11:17:15
Well my try with the notebook

(http://www.bilder-hochladen.net/files/35xi-f.gif) (http://www.bilder-hochladen.net/files/35xi-f.gif)

Your sprite is cute. Looks like a gnome, who is pissed because he has to wear an elf costume.
If it is an elf I'd say make him a bit friendlier.
Title: Re: Mr.Elf and Notebook
Post by: eternal_renegade on Thu 19/07/2007 11:25:44
Quote from: cobra79 on Thu 19/07/2007 11:17:15
Well my try with the notebook

(http://www.bilder-hochladen.net/files/35xi-f.gif) (http://www.bilder-hochladen.net/files/35xi-f.gif)

Your sprite is cute. Looks like a gnome, who is pissed because he has to wear an elf costume.

wow, I really like your version of the notebook!

And also you just gave me an idea which just inspired me to make a game about what you just said. Thanks!