Music Critics on odd song

[n3tgraph]

I made this song yesterday for an intro

Fantasy Dreaming

It is far from finished and has no effects yet.
Any crits are welcome.

I'm planning to change the organ in the end, it's too busy now
also I don't like the bass in the beginning.

oh well

[Oz]

I think it sounds pretty good. Is the opening piano arpeggio a loop? It goes off-beat from time to time. If it is a loop, you should reproduce it manually in the sequencer. I would also pan it closer to the center. The secod part of the song is really cool (voodooish... reminiscent of Le Chuck's Theme from MI). Nice organ work!

[Flashback]

I have no musical talent at all but it sounds very good to me, maybe I'm not really the one to judge since I can hardly string a few notes together but I would still like to say that I really enjoyed listening to that.

Man I wish I could compose music like that.

[Indie Boy]

It reminds me of a band called "MUSE" some their stuff sounds really like that. I really liked that little solo trumpet thing at the start Only thing that bugged me was the drums, they just didn't fit in well at the begining IMO.

[n3tgraph]

I think it sounds pretty good. Is the opening piano arpeggio a loop? It goes off-beat from time to time. If it is a loop, you should reproduce it manually in the sequencer. I would also pan it closer to the center. The secod part of the song is really cool (voodooish... reminiscent of Le Chuck's Theme from MI). Nice organ work!

The piano isn't really an arpeggio...
well, I mean, I did play arpeggio, but I played it manually.
The reason why it sounds off-beat is because the piano loop is in 3/4 and the drums in the second part of the first part (? ) are in 4/4. I just wanted to fool around 

I realise now that the drums in the first part ruin it a little perhaps.
I'll try to fiddle with that!

It reminds me of a band called "MUSE" some their stuff sounds really like that. I really liked that little solo trumpet thing at the start Only thing that bugged me was the drums, they just didn't fit in well at the begining IMO.

To be dead honest, I borrowed the piano thing in the beginning a little from Muse.
I like the music these guys make!

Thanks for all the comments!
I'll post a full version sooner or later