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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Bijulinus on Wed 07/12/2005 20:49:35

Title: My 3D rendered Char.. C&C!
Post by: Bijulinus on Wed 07/12/2005 20:49:35
http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Nascondimi.PNG

What do you think about this?
It's just a demo pose...

http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Walk2.jpg
Here he's walking BUT... this damn jpg make it crappy. :P

Please C&C the sprite, not the 3D model - I'm not a modeler.
http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/WalkJack1.gif
What about this cycle?
Title: Re: My 3D rendered Char.. C&C!
Post by: RocketGirl on Wed 07/12/2005 21:50:35
Not bad at all! What platform are you using?
Title: Re: My 3D rendered Char.. C&C!
Post by: Bijulinus on Wed 07/12/2005 21:53:03
Sorry, what do you mean?
What software?
Title: Re: My 3D rendered Char.. C&C!
Post by: RocketGirl on Wed 07/12/2005 22:14:59
Yes, exactly. 3DS MAX, Blender, Maya, Lightwave...etc.
Title: Re: My 3D rendered Char.. C&C!
Post by: Bijulinus on Wed 07/12/2005 22:16:58
Poser 6.
Do you like it?
Title: Re: My 3D rendered Char.. C&C!
Post by: Elliott Hird on Wed 07/12/2005 22:21:32
Ah. Poser. Premade model, I assume?
Title: Re: My 3D rendered Char.. C&C!
Post by: Bijulinus on Wed 07/12/2005 22:22:48
Yes. Just the face is randomized.
Title: Re: My 3D rendered Char.. C&C!
Post by: RocketGirl on Wed 07/12/2005 22:24:24
Quote from: Bijulinus on Wed 07/12/2005 22:16:58
Poser 6.
Do you like it?

Well, yeah, I like it...but as a 3D modeler myself, I think I'd like it better if you had, you know, done the modeling yourself.  Just sayin'...  ;D
Title: Re: My 3D rendered Char.. C&C!
Post by: MarVelo on Wed 07/12/2005 22:35:51
thats cool, his head bobs like he is rockin out though
Title: Re: My 3D rendered Char.. C&C!
Post by: Kweepa on Wed 07/12/2005 22:37:37
Yes, it would be better to focus the head on a point some distance ahead.
I'd also suggest closing the gap between the fingers and curling them up somewhat.
Other than that, it's a serviceable animation!
Title: Re: My 3D rendered Char.. C&C!
Post by: RocketGirl on Wed 07/12/2005 22:43:21
Re: Walk2.jpg: his legs probably shouldn't cross over each other quite so much, laterally; that's a much more feminine way to walk.
Title: Re: My 3D rendered Char.. C&C!
Post by: Ubel on Wed 07/12/2005 22:47:54
Nice animation. If I were you, I would delete frame 5. It actually shows the same pose as frame 6 and it makes the animation look strange.
Title: Re: My 3D rendered Char.. C&C!
Post by: Bijulinus on Wed 07/12/2005 22:51:46
Well, when I made that pic I made a serious mistake with those legs. Now corrected.

I'm trying to adjust the animation with AGS, but... that's hard...keep working.
Title: Re: My 3D rendered Char.. C&C!
Post by: Elliott Hird on Thu 08/12/2005 18:36:31
Quote from: Bijulinus on Wed 07/12/2005 22:22:48
Yes. Just the face is randomized.

Someone take notice here, you're not critic'ing his work.
Title: Re: My 3D rendered Char.. C&C!
Post by: Huw Dawson on Thu 08/12/2005 18:47:26
Indeed, BUT I think we're suppost to be critisising the walk cycle, rather than the character himself.

1) The arms are two stiff, like the elbows are in rigor mortis.
2) And his neck must be broken for all that wobbling on top to occur...

So I'm assuming he's a zombie, yes? :P