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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: azzola on Fri 16/12/2005 00:34:11

Title: my background
Post by: azzola on Fri 16/12/2005 00:34:11
Hi, I'm azzola...

I make this background for exercise,
it isn't for a game.

what do you think about it?

EDIT  I remove the thumbnail

(http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/5554/finito7cb.jpg) (http://imageshack.us)
Title: Re: my background
Post by: Nikolas on Fri 16/12/2005 00:41:33
First of all hi!

Second, I think that there is a way to show the image in it's original size. You are showing us the thumbnail! But I can't help you on that!

Third! This is a very very nice pic!

A couple of observations I could make are the following

*The items in the BG are kinda strange. They do stick out, but are part of the BG also. And I don't see a way of getting all three items. And the flask looks a little out of perspective, like it is too big.
*If it was to be used in a game, you would have a character entering from the bottom of the BG going in the telescope and coming back. You're using 1/20th of the BG for the character walking in. The rest is just there.

But I like it! And it is apparent that you can draw!
Title: Re: my background
Post by: Gilbert on Fri 16/12/2005 02:40:05
I think it's okay to show the thumbnail, especially when the original pic was large enough, so if people are really interested they'll click it.
Title: Re: my background
Post by: Evil on Fri 16/12/2005 04:09:37
I love this background. A complete game in itself. At first it looked a little dark but after a while my eyes focused and it seemed fine. The only thing I might change is the highlight on the moon. Move the second brightest color up 1/8 of the moon. The paddle seems high, but it looks fine as is.

Nice work. :)
Title: Re: my background
Post by: azzola on Fri 16/12/2005 13:34:25
thanks to all guys!    ;D
Title: Re: my background
Post by: DonB on Fri 16/12/2005 15:01:38
Yeh.. a very nice background, I don't think the flask is too big, since the perspective is from bird-view, from above a little, so the high front things are closest to camera.. at least I ain't bothered about it..

looks very professional