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Title: My character, need C&C
Post by: on Thu 29/07/2004 01:12:04
This is just a quick dub over Eric's template, I'd say it's an ok start for someone with 0 to nil art skill. :D

Small
(http://herbie.topcities.com/Brian2.jpg)

Large
(http://herbie.topcities.com/Brian3.jpg)
Title: Re: My character, need C&C
Post by: Peter Thomas on Thu 29/07/2004 05:53:57
hm... maybe it's just me, but I can't see any pics...?!
Title: Re: My character, need C&C
Post by: Raider on Thu 29/07/2004 07:09:18
Neither... Just small white boxes with little red crosses in them  ;D

- Raider
Title: Re: My character, need C&C
Post by: on Thu 29/07/2004 13:01:00
Snaps! I believe you have to go to the link directly :(

http://herbie.topcities.com/Brian2.jpg

http://herbie.topcities.com/Brian3.jpg
Title: Re: My character, need C&C
Post by: mornin (away for quite a while) on Thu 29/07/2004 13:08:16
Doesn't work either  :-\
Title: Re: My character, need C&C
Post by: on Thu 29/07/2004 14:08:27
Alright last time...

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Brian2.jpg)
Title: Re: My character, need C&C
Post by: mornin (away for quite a while) on Thu 29/07/2004 16:27:53
That's quite good. Nice character. But think about his shirt in the side view.  You should see at least a tiny bit of the green worm that's on the front. And in the back view his feet look a little weird. I know it's like that in Eric's template that you used, but to me it just doesn't look quite alright. But except from these two points, really good.  :D
Title: Re: My character, need C&C
Post by: viktor on Thu 29/07/2004 17:05:39
hm...
nice character. But I think that it's to obvious that you painted over the sprites that  eric gifted us with. I think that you should at least change the shape of his head a bit so it wouldn't be to obvious. But hey it's you character and the sprites were actualy posted for exactly this use, so it's your desidgion to make...
Title: Re: My character, need C&C
Post by: on Sat 31/07/2004 00:54:16
I feel a bit guilty basically ripping off Eric's base, so I made this one from scratch. I need some pointers on shading however... :'(

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/jiggles.gif)
Title: Re: My character, need C&C
Post by: Tiki on Sat 31/07/2004 01:15:37
Don't feel quilty, that's what he gave them to us for!

I may post a paintover later today, it depends.  I'm a little busy...

Edit:  Can you give some more info about this guy?  Which one should I give crits on?
Title: Re: My character, need C&C
Post by: on Sat 31/07/2004 03:26:21
The bald-headed dude  :P
Title: Re: My character, need C&C
Post by: mornin (away for quite a while) on Sat 31/07/2004 11:06:09
I think he looks quite good, but the side view is too small:

(http://www.ninamorgenstern.de/jiggles1.gif)

I did a quick paintover:

(http://www.ninamorgenstern.de/jiggles3.gif)

- thickened his arms a little
- made the side view taller
- added some very basic shading

Hope that helps  :D