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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Meowster on Thu 01/02/2007 21:54:27

Title: my comic
Post by: Meowster on Thu 01/02/2007 21:54:27
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v328/Yufster/comicthatimade3.jpg
C+C plix.

EDIT: made a blog for them here http://cunnnnnt.blogspot.com/
Title: Re: my comic
Post by: Meowster on Thu 01/02/2007 21:59:53
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v328/Yufster/comicthatimade5.jpg
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Post by: Tuomas on Thu 01/02/2007 22:01:18
I think you've got potential! :D
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Post by: LGM on Fri 02/02/2007 01:07:30
I would read this every Sunday in the morning newspaper.
Title: Re: my comic
Post by: Meowster on Fri 02/02/2007 10:39:04
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v328/Yufster/comicthatimade4.jpg
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Post by: Krysis on Fri 02/02/2007 11:45:13
Tastless.
Title: Re: my comic
Post by: Meowster on Fri 02/02/2007 12:23:27
well i can add tasticles if you like :(
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Post by: Sam. on Fri 02/02/2007 12:27:16
stop tricking me into thinking Nathan is rude.

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Post by: Meowster on Fri 02/02/2007 13:11:59
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v328/Yufster/comicimade7-1.jpg
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Post by: TheYak on Fri 02/02/2007 13:20:15
I like the subtlety.
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Post by: jetxl on Fri 02/02/2007 13:31:59
Makes me think about this (http://www.metacafe.com/watch/74160/athf_the_moonites/).
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Post by: Meowster on Fri 02/02/2007 13:59:50
http://cunnnnnt.blogspot.com/

I made a blog for them
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Post by: MrColossal on Fri 02/02/2007 15:08:49
I don't think this is really the place for these comics... at least not directly showing the images.
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Post by: Andail on Fri 02/02/2007 16:41:20
cuss words are one thing, but depicting rape is a bit over the line when it's the matter of a public forum.
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Post by: Mr Flibble on Fri 02/02/2007 17:50:13
Reminds me of this, (http://www.adventuregamestudio.co.uk/yabb/index.php?topic=29909.0) only with a lot more rape and blood.

I'd recommend that you work on the visual style some more. As it stands, there's only so many jokes you can do with mono-expressioned square men being cruel and bizarre. From the comics I read, I only saw one joke. And you've used it four times already. Possibly more, the other comics wouldn't display for me.

Undirected rant warning
I miss the days when web comics were actually drawn by people.

A good webcomic, in my opinion, needs humour (or plot, depends on what you're going for) and eye candy. A comic that only has one part of this formula is like a baby born at 24 weeks. It lies, soaked in blood and pulsating gently, screaming for a death that's as likely to come as not. Of course, some premature babies survive, and go on to have healthy, long, fulfilling lives. It just seems to me that if the drawing part still doesn't gel, then maybe comics aren't the best outlet for that humour.

But yeah, in brief, I'd suggest raising the level of the illustrations or raising the level of the writing.
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Post by: Vel on Fri 02/02/2007 19:45:30
To me this is obvious irony of some other people's comics. And a good job at that, Yuf.
Title: Re: my comic
Post by: Meowster on Fri 02/02/2007 23:29:13
Quote from: Andail on Fri 02/02/2007 16:41:20
cuss words are one thing, but depicting rape is a bit over the line when it's the matter of a public forum.


(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v328/Yufster/untitled.jpg)
Title: Re: my comic
Post by: ManicMatt on Fri 02/02/2007 23:49:37
Such a sweet avatar for such an evil lady.
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Post by: LimpingFish on Fri 02/02/2007 23:58:10
Quote from: ManicMatt on Fri 02/02/2007 23:49:37
Such a sweet avatar for such an evil lady.

Like an arsenic-infused Jammy Dodger.

These comics make me laugh. Cunt is such a misunderstood word.

More please.
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Post by: Chicky on Sat 03/02/2007 00:02:10
Fucking amazing comics. Keep 'em coming.
Title: Re: my comic
Post by: Andail on Sat 03/02/2007 11:12:38
This is a public art-forum, not a help center for people with Tourette's.