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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Mr Jake on Thu 19/06/2003 18:43:31

Title: My first 3D image, C&C plz
Post by: Mr Jake on Thu 19/06/2003 18:43:31
check it out at:
http://www.geocities.com/hotshothoggs/jake.jpg (http://www.geocities.com/hotshothoggs/jake.jpg)

Please ignore the screwed up thumb and the light under the middle finger :(

I would fix the thumb, but now that Ive got this far Ill have to edit hundereds of points :(
Title: Re:My first 3D image, C&C plz
Post by: undergroundling on Thu 19/06/2003 18:50:06
here, i hotlinked it for ya ;)

(http://invis.free.anonymizer.com/http://www.geocities.com/hotshothoggs/jake.jpg)

Looks pretty good so far.

- Bryan
Title: Re:My first 3D image, C&C plz
Post by: ratracer on Thu 19/06/2003 23:28:58
since it's a stylised hand, I don't think there's no need for detailing as tendons or hand lines "stiking" out.

However, I feel that the width of the hand would fit a fifth finger, or else the hand could be a bit thinner...
Also, the back of the hand is IMO too flat, it should have a little bulge...

Anyway, shows promise!!!