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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Pashers on Fri 12/09/2008 00:40:05

Title: My first background - C&C
Post by: Pashers on Fri 12/09/2008 00:40:05
Here is my first background. I posted it before but have made a number of changes since. I'm quite happy with how it turned out, but I wanted to know what you all thought.

(http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/4469/backgroundtest2xx8.th.gif) (http://img134.imageshack.us/my.php?image=backgroundtest2xx8.gif)
Title: Re: My first background - C&C
Post by: Questionable on Fri 12/09/2008 02:54:40
Just a couple of major issues, for me:

The inside of the bar looks like its on an incline.

The sidewalk feels a little off.

The tables are identical.

The door inside the bar doesn't match with the rest of the room.

The building itself feels a little bland.

The lines on the road feel quite arbitrary.



An artist will tell you that it's not an interesting scene- colors- composition- shading, OY VEY!
I'm just trying to help you make what our eyes see make sense.

So that's all I have, really. It's a style that's easy to reproduce through out an entire game, and it's at least an easily recognizable setting. Good luck man and I hop I helped you!
Title: Re: My first background - C&C
Post by: TerranRich on Sat 13/09/2008 04:20:23
Hand-drawn backgrounds, unless artistically PERFECT should really be drawn in 320x240 resolution.
Title: Re: My first background - C&C
Post by: Pashers on Wed 17/09/2008 00:47:56
Here is an update to the background

(http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/9002/backgroundtest2yc3.th.png) (http://img234.imageshack.us/my.php?image=backgroundtest2yc3.png)
Title: Re: My first background - C&C
Post by: Monk on Wed 17/09/2008 07:48:09
sweetness.. as terran said,perfectly drawn in 320 (totallyl classic rules! miss those days) ;D

overall you're doing great! but what im suggesting are shadows, maybe some more complex shadows?

hope it helps..
Title: Re: My first background - C&C
Post by: Pashers on Wed 17/09/2008 13:34:51
Is there anyway of me rescaling the image without blurring it?
Title: Re: My first background - C&C
Post by: Monk on Wed 17/09/2008 13:43:42
well you can do that by turning the antialiasing first if you're using photoshop, but it probably hard to do if you already save the completed pictures in *.jpg format since that format worship the antialiasing.. :P

the other way is try to scale it down using paint, i used to do that back then...

sorry not much of a help.. maybe theres other who experienced enough who can help you in this topic.. :D

good luck mate...
Title: Re: My first background - C&C
Post by: ildu on Wed 17/09/2008 19:31:11
Quote from: Pashers on Wed 17/09/2008 13:34:51Is there anyway of me rescaling the image without blurring it?

Using Photoshop, select IMAGE->IMAGE SIZE to bring up the IMAGE SIZE popup, type in the needed size to rescale to, then replace the default scale method from the bottom of the popup from BICUBIC to NEAREST NEIGHBOR. This will preserve pixel sharpness, but it'll make the resized image look a bit wonky.
Title: Re: My first background - C&C
Post by: Neutron on Thu 18/09/2008 00:01:34
Take a white, or light blue line tool, and make diagonal streaks on the windows at about 50% opacity.  This will make it look more like glass.