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Title: My First Background - Improvements?
Post by: .. on Sat 27/03/2004 18:23:42

This is the first background i've really made,its for a game im working on and features in the opening cutscene.

(Its a hospital Room)

What do you think? Any improvements? Like the style? Hate It :(

If you want to improve it feel free to and post it back here :P I'll give u credit.

Click here to see it (http://http://www.geocities.com/thebroonsfan/img.jpg)

Title: Re:My First Background - Improvements?
Post by: rtf on Sat 27/03/2004 18:58:02

The link is broken, so click here to see it (http://www.geocities.com/thebroonsfan/img.jpg)

EDIT: ok.. nothing works. Geocities sucks, don't it? ;) Just click on the first link and remove the extra http://

anyway...

I like the style. I think that you could add just a few textures of something to make the surfaces more interesting to the eye, becasue they look a bit bland. Like the curtain in that back looks a lot like an extra wall. I think that some pixelized textures could roughen things up a bit.

Title: Re:My First Background - Improvements?
Post by: InCreator on Sat 27/03/2004 19:43:04

Boring... I'd describe this.
Good material for improving, I'd describe this further.
Good one, I'd probably say when you're really done with this.

Title: Re:My First Background - Improvements?
Post by: Gfunkera on Sat 27/03/2004 20:05:29

Quote from: releasethefrogs on Sat 27/03/2004 18:58:02
The link is broken, so click here to see it (http://www.geocities.com/thebroonsfan/img.jpg)

That link worked fine for me.... Good Stuff you may want add a lil' more detail.

Title: Re:My First Background - Improvements?
Post by: on Sat 27/03/2004 20:56:18

Here is the picture .
(http://12.22.230.41/MicroTech/Hosted/Files-A/room343657img.jpg)

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