So this is my very first character REMEMBER im only 11 so thats why its so horrible :P
Im making a lil Joke game but im not saying nothing....yet :-X
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/spman1.PNG) (http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/spman2.PNG)
So whataya think. What should i change? (besides everything)
I know i suck but that's as good as i can do. :'(
There are a couple of 'rogue' pixels hanging out that should probably be removed (hands/sleeves area).
The torso is too long and the legs too short. Bring up the waist and lengthen the legs!
For a first effort it's not bad.
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/spman1edit.PNG)
How about now?
Quote from: Darth Mandarb on Tue 13/04/2004 13:08:50
There are a couple of 'rogue' pixels hanging out that should probably be removed (hands/sleeves area).
What do you mean by rogue?
There's a bunch of information about rogues on this site:
http://www.danddheroes.com/ddh/rogue.php (http://www.danddheroes.com/ddh/rogue.php)
And some more pictures here:
http://www.gfsnet.org/msweb/academics/resources/activities/Dungeons%20and%20Dragons/DungeonsandDragons.html (http://www.gfsnet.org/msweb/academics/resources/activities/Dungeons%20and%20Dragons/DungeonsandDragons.html)
According to the first site, here are some of the Rogue's special moves:
QuoteHide & Move Silentlyâ€" Slipping out of sight, she is so adept at hiding that monsters pass right by her… until they feel a knife in their back!
Vampire Arrow â€" An arrow that takes life from its victim and returns it to the Rogue! The higher the power, the higher the return!
Wild Blades â€" A fierce combo of dagger strikes that slash, jab and split the enemy!
How exciting!
I think he ment a different type of rouge big bro, lol
I took out his blocky mouth and gave him a tiny smile
not much of a change but ,meh.. what the hell
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/spman1edit2.PNG)
The new torso/legs look much better!
By 'rogue' pixels I meant there were some pixels hanging off the edges that shouldn't be there! (double-pixels if you will)
Looks like you got rid of them.
The new version is an improvement and I like the addition of some shading.
Keep it up!
I think what he meant by 'rogue', not rouge, which is french, is this:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/rogues.gif)
When you draw with a brush tool, it creates 'rogues'. You should always edit these out of your image. The one on the right is the dited image.
Well, you're doing a much better job than I at that age. When I was eleven, we didn't even have Paint, let alone PhotoShop.
As a matter of fact, I didn't even have a decent PC until I was 14 or so. :-[
Your character looks hilarious, btw, with the underwear and cape! :D
--Erwin
Thanx Erwin! I only joined ags 3 days ago or somtin like dat so this is my first crit post.
Ty zork for filling me on on the rouge pix'x
-Arman
Captain Underpants fan game, no?