A screenshot from a Larry-style game that I might do
while I'm waiting for inspiration for my 'real' game project.
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/st1.bmp)
The sign on the pink part of the house will be easier to
see in the game, 'cos it's goint to be a flashing neon-light sign
Comments?
Ideas for a main character?
(he should fit into a 320x200-game)
Not bad, but try adding sky effects, textures of the doors, fence, windows etc.
lol cool :)
I think the door in the middle is very inappropriate (is that spelled correct?) It shouldn't be there
If you open it you would see the wall between the 2 shops. As for the pink and camo paintings on the wall, they should have an outline :)
Then lines on the road in holland are white ;)
But keep it up :)
The door in the middle is supposed to go to the staircase that leads to the apartements on the 1:st floor. The house looks like this: |SHOP|STAIRS|SHOP| where the |:s indicates the walls. The painting on the shops goes over the door 'cos it looked ugly with a yellow square there...
But since you mentioned it, I changed the apperance
of the building to minimalize all missunderstandings... ::)
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/st1a.bmp)
That's good, and I like the stairs on the outside. One thing you might want to change is that pink color on the sex shop. It just seems too intense. I think a normal pink color would be better than MsPaint magenta :P
I'll keep that in mind, but i thaught it was whize to stick to the standard-palette...
Looks much better with the stairs on the side. Overall I think it's good, although I agree with Ben on the sex shop color.
Looks great, especially the stairs! I would change the sky color to something lighter for a more cheerful look.
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/st1b.bmp)
1 Changed the magenta-pnk to a more 'neutral' pink
2 Changed the sky from bluse-blue to cheerfull-blue
And I'm kinda 'proud' of the stairs myself, too... :P
I liked the blue sky - kind of mario-ish :)
but this looks good too. The stairs is good.
Pink color still odd :)
keep going
There's no reason to stick to the standard palette. Even if you use 256 colors, AGS can handle a lot more colors than what is used in the default Mspaint palette.
But I shouldn't complain too much ;). Your background looks good, and I think you've improved it a lot with the changes you've made.