hey,
i need some critics for my music...... here is one of my tunes.
any criticism is good. i'm not new to making music, but i am new to the forums and i am new to making music FOR GAMES.
don't worry about the name of the song........ inside joke with my girlfriend... :)
http://uploading.com/files/X5KOPTDO/Schnitzel.wav.html (http://uploading.com/files/X5KOPTDO/Schnitzel.wav.html)
cheers,
musicMan
p.s.
sorry if you got any bad impressions of me after that whole thing with Peter155......
nice job,i love it,you're really good
thanks......... :-\
Exactly the same sentiment... Very good...
Is 'flea' in your msg a chronotrigger reference?
thanks......... and no..... flea is the bassist for the Red Hot Chili Peppers....... i am a bassist you see......
any sort of criticism for my track??
Just curious what are you using to synthesize this? Some of the instruments sound a bit 'tinny'...
THIS IS EXTREEEEMMME Critique.
Frankly your tune is epic, it varies enough to keep from being too too repetitive.
It's catchy, and fast-paced, it's all around good.
I would like to hear you do something slow now, orchestral maybe, or soft jazz-like.
Maybe even fantasy? Think the strings in LOTR.
I really was looking for something to critique but it's hard.
I think a few places could be volumized a bit.
_EDIT_
I went back and kept listening to it, and thought that perhaps a harmony part to the main melody would be nice...
I'm posting an example to show what I mean.
http://www.charlescreations.com/harmonyexample.mp3
ok cool thanks for your help........... i will get right onto that slow piece you were talking about. coming soon hopefully!! thanks alot for your kind words :)
very nice like the riff and layout would sound alot better with some better synths and drums and maybe some more filtering but all in all very nice
thanks.... but that criticism doesn't really judge my writing..... just the technology i use to write it..... :-\
like i said nothing really wrong with the layout but as an artist its not just about the writing it's about the sound as a whole say for example if you were to pitch this to someone as a comercial dancy track it would fail on the drums and use ov synth. ;)
Could you maybe compress it into .mp3 or .ogg? Sharing uncompressed audio on the interwebz is hardly a good idea...