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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Icey on Sat 11/09/2010 07:01:00

Title: my replica of a site
Post by: Icey on Sat 11/09/2010 07:01:00
I was really board thinking about my game so I made a joke yet good replica of a square enix site for my game :] but it's just a fake site you can see it in the copyright section of the page.Visit here and let me know what you think: http://www.wix.com/pubmembers/Pmq2-online- then compare with this http://na.square-enix.com/the3rdbirthday/
Title: Re: my replica of a site
Post by: Andail on Sat 11/09/2010 15:55:12
I was gonna post something along the lines of "why?" but then I thought to myself "why what?" because I don't really understand what it is you've done.
Title: Re: my replica of a site
Post by: Icey on Sat 11/09/2010 16:20:35
I just made a new website for my game but I add the top bar and header of a square enix site and it works just like a real one, but I am going to take it off later on.
Title: Re: my replica of a site
Post by: Andail on Sat 11/09/2010 17:00:01
You seem to have a fondness for unnecessary, barely legible, fluff.

What's all those labels, abbreviations and symbols for? Why not create a straigthforward webpage that presents your project and describes the game in a way people can understand?

All this energy you put on fancy logos, copyright crap, ratings and cryptic phrases like "mog.net GUI: Enabled" could be spent on actually making that game.
Title: Re: my replica of a site
Post by: Anian on Sat 11/09/2010 17:11:51
Seriously? You tried to put that banner/menu but the rest of the page is hardly "designed."
You should learn from SE in that way that you either draw a cool image that looks more like a concept art piece than in game OR find someobdy who likes to draw in SE style and do that for you. I don't think you even have to pay, there's lot s of people on deviant art or on FinalFantasy forums and such, that'll probably do it just for the hell of doing similar art style.

What Andail said, I think you'll have a better shot at doing your own thing but being influenced by Final Fantasy than to actually try to copy everything and shove their name every chance you get.
You like FF cause of it's creativity and yet you do everything not be creative yourself. Being influenced by someone in making something new that's interesting and cool is far more flattering than by copying but changing the names.
Title: Re: my replica of a site
Post by: Icey on Sat 11/09/2010 17:32:04
know wait, i am not copying FF it is just a funny site i really made to show to my friends but I thought it should also be here.like i said before that this is a joke site(a late April fools joke) that I wanted to do before but it is fake i only made this site to take quick a brake from my game.
Title: Re: my replica of a site
Post by: Atelier on Sat 11/09/2010 20:14:08
Quote from: icey games on Sat 11/09/2010 17:32:04
this is a joke site(a late April fools joke)

Saywut? So you don't want critique?

And icey, you got me so bad!
Hahaha, I can't believe I fell for it!
You must be a terror on April the 1st!
Title: Re: my replica of a site
Post by: Icey on Sun 12/09/2010 00:25:43
Hahaha,hopefully I can do some thing better next april.

But no,I really didn't want critic comments on this cause I am vgoing to change it latter on but if you have any thought on how I can make it look more like a square site then I am all ears :]
Title: Re: my replica of a site
Post by: Atelier on Sun 12/09/2010 09:56:13
???

Quote from: Gandalf the Grey
iceygames really is an amazing creature. You can learn all there is to know about his ways in a month, and yet after a hundred years he can still surprise you.

Even if you don't want feedback, still get rid of the Square Enix logos, the ESRB ratings, and the links to Square Enix. None of the small print is necessary because nothing there is legitimate, so get rid of all that to play it safe.
Title: Re: my replica of a site
Post by: Chicky on Sun 12/09/2010 22:25:29
Icey you are amazing, you make me laugh so hard. Please don't ever leave these forums.

I like the slightly higher res character portraits you have on your site. I can't wait until you grow up a little and can apply your efforts a little more consistently.
Title: Re: my replica of a site
Post by: Icey on Mon 13/09/2010 03:44:33
Quote from: Chicky on Sun 12/09/2010 22:25:29
Icey you are amazing, you make me laugh so hard. Please don't ever leave these forums.

I like the slightly higher res character portraits you have on your site. I can't wait until you grow up a little and can apply your efforts a little more consistently.
Thanks. :]

Quote from: Atelier on Sun 12/09/2010 09:56:13
???

Quote from: Gandalf the Grey
iceygames really is an amazing creature. You can learn all there is to know about his ways in a month, and yet after a hundred years he can still surprise you.

Even if you don't want feedback, still get rid of the Square Enix logos, the ESRB ratings, and the links to Square Enix. None of the small print is necessary because nothing there is legitimate, so get rid of all that to play it safe.

Soon I will because I know I am going to be taking that stuff off so I didn't apply it to the other pages of the site.But the ESRB,mog.net & icey games logo stay because the game is going to be rated by esrb all ready asked them and they said yes.
Title: Re: my replica of a site
Post by: Calin Leafshade on Mon 13/09/2010 04:06:04
Hooray, can you pay the $2500 to have my game rated too?

I assume you have passed all the criteria to be considered a *publisher* by the ESRB?
Title: Re: my replica of a site
Post by: R4L on Mon 13/09/2010 06:03:16
Quote from: icey games on Mon 13/09/2010 03:44:33
But the ESRB,mog.net & icey games logo stay because the game is going to be rated by esrb all ready asked them and they said yes.

You owe me a new monitor now. I just shot milk out of my nose all over my screen after reading this.

Come on, do you really expect anyone to believe that?

Quote from: Calin Leafshade on Mon 13/09/2010 04:06:04
Hooray, can you pay the $2500 to have my game rated too?

I assume you have passed all the criteria to be considered a *publisher* by the ESRB?

This.
Title: Re: my replica of a site
Post by: Khris on Mon 13/09/2010 09:46:50
Actually it's $800. Still, either you're a pathetic liar or really dumb for wasting that kind of money, sorry.
Title: Re: my replica of a site
Post by: Icey on Mon 13/09/2010 11:39:52
Then I am really dumb,but I did ask over facebook.
Title: Re: my replica of a site
Post by: rbaleksandar on Mon 13/09/2010 14:46:35
Readying such things I realize for the n-th time why the minimum age for the forums is 16. *sigh* As for the site itself - tasteless pile of d*ng. Many people know HTML, PHP, JavaScript, CSS etc. and yet there are few who can use this knowledge and create really great websites. My advice to you is to sit down on your butt and read/practice before showing your work to someone asking for his/her opinion. You can't show a person a brick and say "What do you think about my house?".  :-\ Build the house and after that show it to whoever you want to.
Title: Re: my replica of a site
Post by: Peanut Monkey on Mon 13/09/2010 14:49:57
Quote from: icey games on Mon 13/09/2010 11:39:52
Then I am really dumb,but I did ask over facebook.
Yeah, the joke persona is wearing thin now.
Title: Re: my replica of a site
Post by: Icey on Mon 13/09/2010 18:44:02
Foreget it because I just don't know what else to say but just wait until the game is done.And I do node no other code why would would I use my time to bluid a site when I can webs and wix,and not only is free but I can also code in them.
Title: Re: my replica of a site
Post by: Dataflashsabot on Mon 13/09/2010 20:05:52
Icey Games, please, please, PLEASE: FORGET ABOUT FINAL FANTASY AND SQUARE ENIX AND ALL OF THAT STUFF. Think up an original game idea, small enough that it's realistic to complete it, draw artwork for it, program it, use a spellchecker on it, release it, utilise the feedback you get on it. Much more rewarding, and nobody will moan about copyright.
Title: Re: my replica of a site
Post by: Atelier on Mon 13/09/2010 20:21:19
YAY Data's optimism!

(http://knowyourmeme.com/system/icons/1732/original/winternet.jpg)

icey please edit your name so it's spelt correctly.

icy |ˈīsē|
adjective ( icier , iciest )
covered with or consisting of ice : there were icy patches on the roads.
Title: Re: my replica of a site
Post by: Icey on Mon 13/09/2010 21:28:52
well i cant because i use he name on other things and i no it is spelled wrong so is Google but they haven't changed it i came up with it when i was younger.

oh and i am not put square's stuff in my game i took every thing out pmq that made it ff moogles,chocobos, and cid. my last square game will be neku's new trip 3 chap8.
Title: Re: my replica of a site
Post by: Dataflashsabot on Mon 13/09/2010 21:40:49
'Know', not 'no'. 'No' means 'negative', 'know' means 'to have knowledge'. Just because they sound similar doesn't mean you can interchange them for the sake of two keystrokes. Further, the pronoun 'I' should always be capitalised. 'Can't' has an apostrophe. New sentences must begin with a capital. Use commas to add pauses, not just to list items. Here is your post written correctly:
Quote
Well, I can't, because I use this name on other things. I know it's spelled wrong. So is Google, but they haven't changed it. I came up with it when I was younger.

Oh, and I'm not putting Square's stuff in my game. I took all FF stuff out of PMQ: Moogles, Chocobos, and Cid. My last Square game will be Neku's New Trip 3 chap8.
Title: Re: my replica of a site
Post by: Andail on Mon 13/09/2010 21:41:54
Ok, I think the point has been made.