background c&c

Started by Kaio, Fri 31/10/2008 08:55:22

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Kaio

Hi, here's a background I did some time ago. What do you think about it? How could I improve it?



Thanks, Kaio

Khris

It's a really nice start; but here's two suggestions:

-the lighting of the tree's left side is off; the roots look like lit from underneath.
-I'd smoothen the transition between the grass and the path; the environment looks like a forest rather than a park, so there's probably nobody around to trim the edges, right? ;)

Buckethead

Yeah need to straighten the tree a little, it seems to be going thicker upwards.

Snake

Wow, that's really beautiful!

I agree with all of the above. One thing I've noticed is that the grass around the tree and around the path is a brighter green... almost looks radioactive ;) I would try to blend it a little more.

I think it would be nice to also have patches of grass in the path as well.
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