Like the title ? (sorry moderators )

[Crypto]

First, moderators..i'm so sorry, no i didn't read the rules but my game just went so great and i got packed up in a rage so I wanted to tell everyone, so .. i'm really sorry !

I'd just like to ask if you guys like this title of my new game:

Al the Alien: You don't have time..

It's about an alien, who get's in jail by accident and sees the world go in fast-forward, someone is behind this and he wants to find out who..He later finds out that I.llegal, M.affia, and Mac McMug are behind it, and he's got to stop them one at a time!

So what do you think? 

[Sam.]

Dude. Seriously. Not to be harsh as this is only your second post, but think before posting. You know you didn't read the rules yet you still post? To be honest that game idea could wait just five minutes. I like the concept but the cheesy names are a bit too much. come up with some really italian names if you want to make it clear they're mafia. Also, i'm sure ive heard al the alien before but i may be wrong. Why is he in prison? "by acccident" doesn't cut it for me but ,maybe im just picky

[Crypto]

You find why you're in prison in the game, but I don't wan to make a big deal out of it.Yeah..maybe you're right about the names..I guess is should change it

Thanks for the help

[Mr Jake]

do a forum search for 'Rodekills Design Doc' and follow that

Edit: actually, dont, Ill see if I can upload it since I cant find the link again

eeep, I cant find it on my Harddrive D:

[Crypto]

And what about this screenie : http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/althealien.jpg

My first home-made room , so go easy on me

Oh and do you have a better idea for badguy names perhaps

[Sam.]

you have a good style, but you need to fill in some of the shite WHITE spaces, i will do a quick edit in a mo
EDIT: I apologise for my foul language

[Scummbuddy]

The title to me, just doesn't 'roll well off the tounge'. I was thinking...

Al the Alien:
Outta Time!

[Crypto]

Hmm interesting, yeah I like that too.
Thanks man !  8)

[Crypto]

Ok, so the changes for now are:
Al the Alien: Outta Time !

Badguys:
Seamus McMug
Don Luigi del Solo
and I don't know a replacement for I.llegal yet

[Andail]

Let me guess: You read in the rules that you shouldn't double-post, but your game went so great you didn't have time to edit your post?

[BlackMan890]

I did a quick paintover:
befour*

after

EDIT:

*hardened the color
*changed the wall and the ceiling
*added a card identifier
*added a air conticien*
*added a window
*removed the picture

i thought that because this is an alien, i had the wall and ceiling out of steel
NOTE, the perspective* is WAY OFF

* (forgive my english)

[Edwin Xie]

Shouldn't this be in the Games in Production forum?

[Moox]

No, he wants advice on the game idea and bg

[Evil]

I see I'm not the only one who learned from Eggie's tutorial.

[Crypto]

Let me guess: You read in the rules that you shouldn't double-post, but your game went so great you didn't have time to edit your post?

Oh come on, I was just making an overview, I did read that part ! I just didn't feel the need for editing !
But if you want that so bad, ok , no more serious crimes.

And Blackman890:
Yeah, it is old, but later you find out that's it an old cell.
(very Old )
And I wasn't trying to make this game to serious, like Monkey Island and Space Quest : Things happen in the game which you can't place and are just .. uh .. bullshitÃ, 
Nice art by the way.