I can't draw characters, so I've gone for this brand of 'through the eyes' humour.
(http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f349/Captain_Stu/AGS/webcomic1.jpg)
A thousand, a million, a zillion apologies, but...
HUH?
EDIT: On a more constructive note, I think gif would be a better format for your image. The jpeg has too many artifacts.
You take a person who's on psycho-pharmacological drugs, give him some booze and a gun and it will end in blood shed?
Don't know, feels more like some governmental notice than a comic. It doesn't really make you laugh, anyhow.
I don't believe you need step 3 to get someone killed.
I interpreted more as instructions for suicide.
But I don't think you should clarify what it means...just let us stay in mystery. Then it's ART!
I thought it was a comment on the health-care system. You can't afford brand-name drugs, so you try the generic drugs, but they don't work, so you buy a gun and boom: health-care problem solved.
Edit: on a more constructive note, you could always use stick figures if you can't draw. Several successul webcomics use stick people (Cyanide & Happiness, etc.) Of course, making people-less comics is more unique.
There's potential in this "through the eye" comic. The strip did not make me laugh nor I found it interesting (and I share libertarian views, so I could even say I disliked somewhat the message),
but I stared long at it (and even now I'm staring at it). There is something that catches your attention, something intriguing about the FPV. It feels more like a sequence of photo-shots or storyboard.
Please give us another example so I can finally decide if it's hot or not ;)
Looking at the replies in this thread (everyone's got their own interpretation) I'd say this strip succeeds! ;)
--Erwin
The fourth step seems like a parody of FPS games, where death means a bright red screen!
But yeah.... there's no obvious theme thats going to occur in your strips, and it's not funny. :-\
Once you've allowed pharmacies, one thing leads to another and all hell breaks loose? Sorry, I can't really make heads or tails of this.