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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Igor on Sun 07/05/2006 11:52:24

Title: Naughty (well, it is, so be warned :))
Post by: Igor on Sun 07/05/2006 11:52:24
(http://www.bugbrain.com/igor/s1a.jpg)

long time no posting :)
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Post by: Krysis on Sun 07/05/2006 12:03:20
Absolute coolness! I want it on a postcard.Ã,  ;D
Oh, but her hand doesn't look like a hand. :=
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Post by: Afflict on Sun 07/05/2006 12:34:19
must be british...  8)

heh heh
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Post by: skw on Sun 07/05/2006 12:49:52
Cute! ;)

Welcome back then!
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Post by: DonB on Sun 07/05/2006 19:22:13
I really like the style and all, tho i gotta say.. imo its rather sick to make a nudity of a 12-year old girl..

why dont you try out this talent on a nice 24-year round-booped woman.. cause really.. you do got the talent.

EDIT: checked out your website, there are some nice 24-ish sexy women there.. thats good :)
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Post by: Igor on Sun 07/05/2006 20:20:10
DonB, haha believe me, she's well over 20
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Post by: Sektor 13 on Sun 07/05/2006 20:21:56
She looks around 20 to me.

Very nice :D
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Post by: Chicky on Sun 07/05/2006 21:58:43
THIS is exactly what i'm aiming to go for with my current art. I would love you forever if you could give me a few pointers igor, feel free to check out my thread here:  http://www.adventuregamestudio.co.uk/yabb/index.php?topic=26400.0


And i think the image is just perfect as it is, would look nice with a background mind :)
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Post by: Nine Toes on Sun 07/05/2006 22:25:04
Quote from: Krysis on Sun 07/05/2006 12:03:20
Absolute coolness! I want it on a postcard.  ;D
Oh, but her hand doesn't look like a hand. :=

Yeah, it kinda looks like a camel toe.
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Post by: TheYak on Mon 08/05/2006 02:05:11
Really?  First thing I saw was a hand..  even trying to see it as other things, the three visible fingers still make me think fingers, not labia. 

If she's not tanned on her breasts, I'm guessing it's due to a bikini top rather than lack of melanin, so where are the strap lines (horizontal if not vertical)?  If there aren't meant to be any, please give directions to the nearest beach where this type of suit is common (for research purposes, of course).
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Post by: Igor on Mon 08/05/2006 10:09:54
and a few more "notsonaughty" character sketches
(http://www.bugbrain.com/igor/maskotesmall1.jpg)

Sektor 13- thanks! Btw, The Infinity String looks fabulous!
Chicky- cool, i'll take a look and reply!
TheYak- let's call it.. um.. artistic freedom ;)
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Post by: cpage on Mon 08/05/2006 10:18:12
Igor  Good to see ya, it really has been a while!
    *cough*release Ignac *cough*  :P
but seriously how ya been?

the art looks great as always  I really like the pig!
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Post by: Igor on Mon 08/05/2006 15:36:39
Hey cpage! :) Busy is all i can say.. was moving in a new appartment and along the way grabed a project or two too many at the same time :)
Anyway it looks like, it will take some time before i'll finally be able to draw/make something for my soul again..
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Post by: Helm on Mon 08/05/2006 15:45:17
Igor, why no width variations on the outlines that you've used on the first one? Would probably help. Either that or losing the outlines altogether (im sure you can find another way to differentiate limbs than one flat line)?

the latter post has much, much more lively art.
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Post by: Nikolas on Mon 08/05/2006 21:30:13
Philosophical post, so get ready.

Helm (and Igor of course): I understand what you mean, my Greek friend, and I do feel that technically you're right. But on the other hand an artist (and Igor has proven to be one, and I don't say that much) has a right to 'choose the wrong way' sort of saying. For me the 1st post works the best, as it takes out the liveness, as you say correctly, and it is in favour maybe, as it may not want ot attract too much attention.

Sort of that is...

Anyway, I'm here to claim that I'm a fan of both Igor and Helm (for whom I high-jacked sort-of the thread, but not really).
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Post by: buloght on Mon 08/05/2006 21:45:01
Igor, that's brilliant work :) Great style!!!
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Post by: Igor on Tue 09/05/2006 08:12:53
Hey Helm! Thanks for great suggestions! :)
Agree, it would probably look better if i'd get rid of lines completely. Problem is, i think the only way i'd be able to define some parts of the character this way (at least as far as i was trying), would be through using shading.. and i didn't want to go there with this pic. So instead i decided to leave inside lines as they were and only get rid of the outside lines.
Yeah, some parts probably wouldn't need lines even as it is, but if i'd erase them and leave only the most important ones, it would look even more inconsistent.

As for lines with varied thickness- they don't look that good on characters without outlines. Don't know.. did try it out a few times before, but in my opinion, they draw too much attention to themselfs (as there's no outside line, to make a balance), so now i use colored thin lines with this style. They are less dynamic, but at the same time less visible and still there to define character as much as needed.

And thanks Nikolas and Buloght! :) Glad you like it
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Post by: cpage on Tue 09/05/2006 11:27:05
Yeah i figured you were busy   you always seem busy   but this like all of your other projects looks great

Great to see you again tho and good luck keeping up with all your work!
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Post by: ildu on Tue 09/05/2006 12:04:02
Igor, you truly are Captain Awesome-o.
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Post by: Helm on Tue 09/05/2006 17:06:04
Igor: I see, yeah I gave it some thought and you're probably correct in that approach.

Nikolas: people like Igor don't need other users sticking up for their artistic choices. I'm fully aware of how good he is and that's why I didn't just complement him and move on but instead gave him critique.
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Post by: Svartberg on Tue 09/05/2006 19:35:45
Igor, i just love your style, keep on rocking :)