hey hoe.. i mean ho
ive got a pic ot show ya, its very rude and contains nudity soo no kids!
http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v54/oversizedchicken/Pr0n.gif
it was drawin in flash, and exported to bmp then converted in psp to gif. why? because flash4 exports crappy gifs.
can i get some c+c, i know it needs bg, for te record her legs are meant ot be hanging over bedposts.
hehe
-OSC
*edit* dont worry, i wont put it in my sig :P
Schweet!!! Naughty, but sweet!
I need two seconds to...gather my thoughts ...yeah that's it ...gather my thoughts... then i'll c&c... mmmmmm....
hey, i just realised, her right tit is bigger than the other!!!!
oops. thanx for the quick reply YoKe, have fun ... errr... gathering thoughts.
-OSC
She looks like she's having alot of fun. Is she ********* herself?
::)
Nice.
But it is quite blatently an attempt to draw porn, rather than draw a nude-female. ::)
Crit wise, there's something not quite right about her left leg (the one on the right as you look at it), I'm not sure what. Her right leg looks fine. I think one is thinner than the other.
agree with mods....Take some 'simple nudes' as ref instead of porn...as for the pic...not bad...Not to keen on the head though...probably b/c her chin looks asif smacked with a hammer from the right...her right hand looks strange aswell...
her head looks bit unnatural and I'd pay more attention to hair!
but OSC, why are you drawing pr0n?
Why not? ;D
I personally would like to know a guy who draws pr0n. Maybe you'll start up a page at wwoec someday!
my point adzactly Sedriss.
nah, i was learning the art of drawing the female body, and i thought to myself ... whats the best way of drawing posture/positions, well drawing them in awkward positions. And guess what came to mind.
ohh, and also a friend wanted me to draw it for her.
okies, thanks for the clit crit. I'll fix it up and post the edit.
-OSC
no offense but i don't really think you need to share your personal pornography with us...i don't think this is very artistic, and i don't think this is going to be an effective way for you to learn to draw the female body. you didn't even seem to focus on her form, as evidenced by the lack of proportion in her breasts, thighs, etc. if you want to learn the female form better I suggest
a) draw larger
b) attempt more detail
c) sketch by pencil; it is very easy to assess artistic progress and problems from a pencil sketch...and adding in the complexity of using flash or some other computer program is not going to speed up your learning curve
d) find an artist who can do pencil sketches that you admire and try to copy some of his work...you will notice little tricks about how to draw certain parts that you will not forget
e) you don't need to focus on interesting poses. the most basic poses are the most difficult anyway...when you attempt a more contorted, complex, or less natural scene, your work will tend to look better but not because you're drawing better, because our eyes aren't as ocustomed (sp?) to looking at it and we don't notice the flaws as quickly
ok so you got some nice tips there but theres no need to be soo harsh,
"you didn't even seem to focus on her form, as evidenced by the lack of proportion in her breasts, thighs, etc"
i was bored and having a laugh, hell atleast some people apreciated it. If you were not interested in the whole pornography. that why go to the link clearly labled pr0n?
-OSC
QuoteIf you were not interested in the whole pornography. that why go to the link clearly labled pr0n?
Excellent point, OSC
Quotec) sketch by pencil; it is very...
...And don't remember to isolate yourself from other people during that. Or they may get wrong thoughts about you.
Quoteb) attempt more detail
Hmm.... :-\
Quotea) draw larger
Second "hmm...."
Quote from: m0ds on Thu 22/04/2004 00:37:13
But it is quite blatently an attempt to draw porn, rather than draw a nude-female.
There is a difference? :-[
QuoteThere is a difference? :-[
Well I'd try mastering drawing a nude posing female rather than a masturbating one first, you randy so and so.
Its good, however I think you're pushing the limits of porn and art. Its great art wise but not the most appropriate thing in the world.
Quote from: OSC on Thu 22/04/2004 18:29:33
ok so you got some nice tips there but theres no need to be soo harsh,
"you didn't even seem to focus on her form, as evidenced by the lack of proportion in her breasts, thighs, etc"
i was bored and having a laugh, hell atleast some people apreciated it. If you were not interested in the whole pornography. that why go to the link clearly labled pr0n?
-OSC
Your first post said that you were trying to do sexual art. Since it was in the AGS critics lounge I assumed it was for your game somehow. I am not offended by porn and I like sexual art. Then I clicked on the link and saw that it was more like your horny doodling that didn't have anything to do with AGS, and not really anything to do with art either. I was not offended, more like, dissappointed. I just think you chose the wrong section to post in....it would be better off in like the off topic or something...
QuoteI just think you chose the wrong section to post in....it would be better off in like the off topic or something...
I feel a bit strange and I ...agree! I think that at General Discussion you may find alot better audience and opinions, because the way people take this thread is somewhat different. It's not "Please give me fair critics on my attempt to draw anatomy of female body" but more like a "hey, I drew a girl playing with... what do you think?"
Or something like that. CL is supposed to be more serious place and this pic cannot be taken very seriously, I think. At least, not here.
hey OSC,
where'd you hear about Muse?
they changed my life
Mmmm... pr0n...
Now it just needs to be animated! ;D
I did something rather similar, similar pose.
Although it was pixel art. i could dig it up if anyone is interested.
Who gets offended by PORN??!?
yeh but put it this way, if i put it in the gen gen board, saying hey. Hows this look? is thre anything wrong with the legs ect? then id get "put it in the critics lounge"
and yes muse rule, and so do nirvana, sound garden, SOAD, foo and GreenDay.
-OSC
OSC ... you're naughty. Naughty!!
Seriously though ... it reminds me of the middle games in the Leisure Suit Larry series. A little more exposing perhaps.
Not realistic, but stylistic.
cheers sonic ... i mean darth. It was just a lil doodle really... nothing special
-OSC
QuoteSince it was in the AGS critics lounge I assumed it was for your game somehow.
Is the critics lounge only for game-graphics/tunes/whatever?
I figured that you could post anything art-related here.
Am I wrong?
Seriously. Im just asking.
Well, things for games are like - traditional or so. Of course, there's some other things occassionally popping up, such as website designs or some interesting pieces of art/music, but still, basic line is game sfx/gfx.