C&C: My first room

[Spulaser]

So here it is:

http://www.rain-day.com/hindersh/files/Room1.jpg

Sorry, it is bit dark, because of jpg. format, but anyway, it is meant to be part of destroyed spaceship. I really have hard time figuring out what to do next.

Yeah, I know I know, the resolution ain't right. This is actually "test", as I just wanted to test my skills. Anyway, final version is still made from this.

C&C please, how to make it better.
*Hmmm... walls seem to be too clean... any idea how to add all kinds of dirt into them? It seems, that I must do more "bullet" holes also.
*Door is bit wacky... and control panel next to it.
*I'm bad in shading. Shading just seems to be strange. Anyone willing to help?

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Far too, Far too dark, even for JPG....

Would add some bright silver glints or something,

Its just strange that the thing in the top corner is so bright and the rest is so dark.. looks odd.

[Andail]

I'm not really sure what I'm looking at...can you you walk around in that scene?

The sun is just annoying, especially with that bright corona; add some vague bluish star in the background instead, that'd be more effecient

[Darth Mandarb]

Yes, it's a tad dark.

Other than that I would add some depth to the walls and add some panelling details to the wall.  Also, lessen the brightness of the sun.

Something like this:


This is just a hilight paintover, I didn't have time to do all the details!

Hope it helps.

[Rincewind]

My main complaint would be the darkness of the picture, as both Scuthbert, Andail and Darth said.Ã, 
And since this obviously is supposed to be a moonlit night, things are bound to be a bit lighter, so increasing the brightness on the ground/ruins, etc, and keeping the sky as it is, is one suggestion... (Because it is the moon and not the sun, right? )

Good luck!

[Synthetique]

walls? door? what? i can see stars and a moon or a sun... and some gray lines..

[Eigen]

* Made it brighter
* Added a little shading

-Eigen