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Title: need critic on character
Post by: Secret Fawful on Sun 18/07/2004 20:44:20

a main character from my game the treasure thieves: he is a lion cub that is a genius www.2dadventure.com/ags/ADAM.jpg (http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/ADAM.jpg)

what do you think ;D

Title: Re: need critic on character
Post by: sp on Sun 18/07/2004 23:48:02

i see some white blotches on the tail...other than that you did ok

Title: Re: need critic on character
Post by: Secret Fawful on Sun 18/07/2004 23:54:04

thanks

Title: Re: need critic on character
Post by: auhsor on Mon 19/07/2004 06:40:14

Nice work! The only problem I see is the red/orange bits. His eyebrows look kinda strange, and also that whole yellow/orange thing on his head is weird. What is it?

Title: Re: need critic on character
Post by: Secret Fawful on Mon 19/07/2004 17:34:10

his hair is supposed to be shiny but i guess i sorta messed up on that :o

Title: Re: need critic on character
Post by: mousemat on Fri 30/07/2004 08:42:35

Quote from: Fawfulhasfury on Mon 19/07/2004 17:34:10
his hair is supposed to be shiny but i guess i sorta messed up on that :o

he looks brill what did you make him on?

Title: Re: need critic on character
Post by: Gilbert on Fri 30/07/2004 08:47:27

Please don't repost other's pics (or include them in quotes) if there's nothing to do with it, or you're not asked for it, it will just clutter up threads, thank you.

Anyway the character's great, will there be a walkable character sprite apart from this closeup? :D

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