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Title: need masive help on char
Post by: Moox on Sun 11/04/2004 14:34:41
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/char.PNG)

This is only my second char ever and i need some massive help. I intended him to look like an late 1800's early 1900's detective and he turned out modern looking.
Title: Re:need masive help on char
Post by: Kweepa on Sun 11/04/2004 14:46:41
Here's a quick paintover.
I kept it in style.

(http://www.mccrea.demon.co.uk/step/ags/gradgrind.gif)

Gave him a top hat - nobody went out without a hat in Victorian times.
Gave him muttonchops.
Shortened his neck.
Took hands out of pockets and lengthened his coat tails.
Added some detail to the jacket.

Cheers,
Steve
Title: Re:need masive help on char
Post by: on Sun 11/04/2004 14:49:47
Yeah, here's another one:
(http://xixgaming.leafo.net/images/art/sprites/losttraveler-sprite.png)

- Made the jacket longer.
- Added a top hat.
- Put his hands IN his pockets. Like them like that. :P
- Lowered his shoulders a little to make him seem less stiff.
- dragged the trousers in one pixel to make it seem like his hands are actually in the pockets and that they overlap the shoes.
Title: Re:need masive help on char
Post by: Dart on Sun 11/04/2004 14:50:35
 The first thing that pops into mind when I hear "detective from the late 1800's early 1900's" is someone wearing a hat, cape, and holding a cane. Perhaps you should try adding those to your character.

Hey, why not...

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/mrdetective2.png)
Title: Re:need masive help on char
Post by: Moox on Sun 11/04/2004 14:56:59
Thanxs to all of you, I will incorperate some of your ideas into version 2
Title: Re:need masive help on char
Post by: on Sun 11/04/2004 14:58:55
Yeah, and just to point out. I lowered some of the pixels of his shoulders to make them seem a little less stiff.
Title: Re:need masive help on char
Post by: dasjoe on Sun 11/04/2004 15:12:56
based on SteveMcCrea's hcar:

recolored the clothes.
greyed his hair.
lenghtened the coat even more.
took the red out of his lips.
20 colors. (including background)

(http://www.so-einiges.de/hx/lt_char.gif)

maybe the coat is too long now.

edit: oops, really looks crap. use dart's ideas.


Title: Re:need masive help on char
Post by: Moox on Sun 11/04/2004 15:21:59
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/char2.PNG)


I made 2 different outfits for him which I will use interchangebly throughout the game
Title: Re:need masive help on char
Post by: Kweepa on Sun 11/04/2004 16:27:07
Good choices, I think...
I like the creased trousers.
I'd darken them to RGB = (99,84,79) with the crease at (70, 60, 60).
And lighten the lines separating his arms from his body.
Title: Re:need masive help on char
Post by: dasjoe on Sun 11/04/2004 16:31:35
but i would still reduce the hat height. or at least make it more round.

atm the hat looks too ?aristocratic? to me.
Title: Re:need masive help on char
Post by: Kweepa on Sun 11/04/2004 16:34:00
The short round hat reminds me of Watson.
The tall square hat reminds me of Holmes.
That was my thinking anyway.
Title: Re:need masive help on char
Post by: [Cameron] on Mon 12/04/2004 07:28:28
Started by giving him suspenders and bowler hat. Got carried away and turned him into alex from a Clockwork Orange. ???

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/cwoalex.jpg)