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[Dr Fred Rubacant Edison]

This is the other side of the Kitchen.    Dose the Service Elevator on the right side look ok???

Note this background is not done yet. But tell me what you think so far?

Allso the Rotisserie stove is built into the cabs.

[GarageGothic]

You've captured the Maniac Mansion style pretty well. But the perspective of the service elevator (I assume we're supposed to be seeing the inside of the box?) is way off. From this perspective you shouldn't even be able to see the righthand side of it. Try using the perspective of the chairs for reference. The left side is parallel to the rear wall, so the line indicating depth should be horizontal. As it is now, it looks as if the top and bottom are sloped and the box is only 10 cm deep.

I'd also add some variety to the top cupboards. There's too much repetition as if the doors have just been copy-pasted. Try replace a few cupboards with open shelves with items on them.

What's that gray thing below the table, a gas line for the candelabra?

[TwinMoon]

A fast edit of how I think the perspective on the service elevator approximately should be:


Other than that the cupboards above the kitchen are way too repititive, but GarageGothic already said that (while I got ready to post  );

[Dr Fred Rubacant Edison]

Thank you for the fast edit and your right about the cupboards im going to fix it.

And you its a gas line.

Thank you for the posts and the help.

[Stupot]

Personally I'd bring those double doors in a little bit.  That little strip of tiling between them and the right-hand wall looks a bit dodgy, but the only thing I can say that hasn't already been said.  It looks good. I love the decor.

[Neutron]

The torn wallpaper is too regular and clean.  I would change the shape of the tear, and add add irregular off-white edges, so it looks more like torn paper.  It might help to think about how it became torn, and reflect that in the shape of the tear.

[Dr Fred Rubacant Edison]

Here is a update



Thank you for the crits and the help.

[TerranRich]

That dumb-waiter on the right side... the interior looks slanted upward now. Here is a comparison to what it should look like...



Try that over what you have, and you'll see how it just looks better.