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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: NaStY_FrEaK on Sat 26/07/2003 09:38:08

Title: Need some opinions on this *ROOM*style
Post by: NaStY_FrEaK on Sat 26/07/2003 09:38:08
These are the rooms ;D
All critics are very welcome-Thankz! ;D
http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/seloto.JPG
http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/taverna.JPG
;D
Title: Re:Need some opinions on this *ROOM*style
Post by: Scummbuddy on Sat 26/07/2003 12:22:26
The door in the Tavern seems to be too short when up against/ near the bar.  If someone was standing behind the bar and then walked up to the door, they would be too big, in my opinion.

The outside shot, the middle building isnt producing a light on the outside ground like the first building is, and the last building's door seems to flat, if you could build up some thickness of the boards blocking the door, it would look better.

Nice job so far though.  :)
Title: Re:Need some opinions on this *ROOM*style
Post by: NaStY_FrEaK on Sat 26/07/2003 12:52:34
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/selototo.JPG)
These are the updated Bg-s.
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/tavernata.JPG)
C&C are welcome
Thankz!!!
Title: Re:Need some opinions on this *ROOM*style
Post by: Scummbuddy on Sat 26/07/2003 17:52:43
actually i just noticed that you made something that is either physically impossible, or you just like Tim Burtons style.  The bar, when looked at from the bottom, is almost touching the wall, like an inch away.... and if you look at the top, its like a few feet away.

so what im saying is for you to pull it out away from the wall a bit
Title: Re:Need some opinions on this *ROOM*style
Post by: danny* on Sat 26/07/2003 17:53:44
i like them both in general!!
both are a little empty for my taste,#1add more stuff..like bushes,a waste basket,etc.
#2 bottles,glasses,....
i like the tavern BG more than the outside one!
good work,so far!! :)
Title: Re:Need some opinions on this *ROOM*style
Post by: NaStY_FrEaK on Sat 26/07/2003 19:50:20
Hey guys thank you both for your advices.
Now I`m working on them,and I will show the updates
when they are finished.
Thankz ;D
Title: Re:Need some opinions on this *ROOM*style
Post by: Neole on Sun 27/07/2003 08:02:16
I like! All those lines on the walls in the tavern look a bit odd though.
Title: Re:Need some opinions on this *ROOM*style
Post by: D · Y · D · O on Mon 28/07/2003 23:26:03
Change the font you used for 'Tavern', it's too generic.
Especially if this is for your medieval time travelling game.

Typing in "medieval fonts" in Google led me to this: http://www.flatearth.com/forum/links_showsub.asp?cat_id=2&cat=Fantasy+and+Medieval+Fonts (http://www.flatearth.com/forum/links_showsub.asp?cat_id=2&cat=Fantasy+and+Medieval+Fonts)
Title: Re:Need some opinions on this *ROOM*style
Post by: NaStY_FrEaK on Tue 29/07/2003 10:35:16
thankz  ;D
But yesterday my father deleted all of My pictures Folder :'(and now I started new project.
If you want you can still edit these pic-s and use them