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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: InCreator on Fri 17/06/2016 12:05:36

Title: Need some sprite criticism
Post by: InCreator on Fri 17/06/2016 12:05:36
I spent some time making pixels today. This is where I ended up...

[imgzoom]http://i.imgur.com/HHQECCN.png[/imgzoom]
Here's one without background (for edits n such)
[imgzoom]http://i.imgur.com/Gf8ixZj.png[/imgzoom]

And forcefully 4x scaled because Chrome just sucks.
(http://i.imgur.com/liWIymu.png)

I'm not sure what to do with eyes. They just don't work. I've been arranging and rearranging pixels for quite a while, but it still doesn't feel quite right.
Also, bomber jacket looks like he's hiding litter of kittens under it, although that's actually quite possible in an adventure game :D
Any ideas?
Title: Re: Need some sprite criticism
Post by: KyriakosCH on Fri 17/06/2016 17:41:15
I like it!!! :)
Title: Re: Need some sprite criticism
Post by: shaun9991 on Fri 17/06/2016 18:00:08
Great work!
Title: Re: Need some sprite criticism
Post by: InCreator on Fri 17/06/2016 19:23:31
I think I figured this out: made head smaller and now I can get away with no visible eye elements at all
(http://i.imgur.com/jMPqwOK.png)

Also fine-tuned shading on bomber jacket and general proportions
(http://imgur.com/qsRilTm.png)

Title: Re: Need some sprite criticism
Post by: KyriakosCH on Fri 17/06/2016 21:18:25
^A lot better!
Title: Re: Need some sprite criticism
Post by: SinSin on Fri 17/06/2016 22:26:33
Spot on work there Inc. :-D
Title: Re: Need some sprite criticism
Post by: Danvzare on Sat 18/06/2016 09:48:59
It looks much better now.
Somehow, shrinking the head fixed all of the problems I noticed, even (strangely enough) the hunched shoulders.
Title: Re: Need some sprite criticism
Post by: Monsieur OUXX on Mon 04/07/2016 16:19:13
This is a rather good sprite, colors and contrast-wise.

Maybe just slightly increase the contrast: everything facing upwards should be slightly lighter (e.g. shoulders) and everything facing downwards should be slightly darker (e.g. the lower part of the beard) ?

But it's good enough to go as it is.