(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/dude.jpg)
His name is dude. He will hopefully get a better name.
Could someone make him a walkcycle. Tell me what you think of the pic.
Thats good, I think it would be better if you look at someone elses WAlkcycle (such as DM's little walking man) and try and get yours to do the same sort of thing.
The character is well drawn IMO, but the all white eye dont look right :)
I tried putting stuff in the eye but it turned out weird. :P
[Big Lebowski-mania]Well, either that or "Duder", or "Your Dudeness" or "El Duderino", if you're not into the whole breveity thing... [/Big Lebowski-mania]
Hehe, ok, seriously... I did this simple edit to demonstrate some points that could use improvement. (Try to avoid looking at the .gif compression...)
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/chara.gif)
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/chara.gif)
First of all, I changed the outline - From black ones into darker shades of the colours in question. i don't know whether you prefer this or not, but I think looks better.
2nd: I redid his arms. In your picture, he kind of looks like he is about to fly or do the macarena... :) If you look at how you normally hold your arms when standing up, you'll notice that they fall along the sides of your body. (Well, most of the time, anyway...)
I did the arms rather long though, just for comical effect.
3rd: His face. I don't know, but the original sort of reminded me of Terrance & Philip from South Park... I don't know if it was intentional or not, but I added a more "normal" mouth anyway... I also compressed his head slightly, and added a throat/neck.
4th: Eyes. I just did a very simple fill-in here, but it looks better than just having them white. Having one eye smaller than the other looks cool though, I think, so I kept that... :)
This was just my own little edit, so if you find it totally wrong for what you had in mind, don't bother - But it might have a point or two... Hope it was helpful!
Good luck!