new background - beach shore

Started by Sim, Mon 27/10/2003 06:09:38

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Sim

Hi all,

I'm new to ags and the forum and would appreciate any comments/suggestions
you have to offer on my new background (colour, detail, shading etc.).


http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/beach1.png

cpage

can you possably post it as a gif or png?
I'm having trouble telling the kick ass pixel work from the jpg speckles :P
but from what I can seen i love it

BOYD1981

that's a very nice background you've managed to make (the jpeg compression kind of messes it up though, try posting a PNG or if it's under 256 colours, a GIF version), the water is very nice, you might want to try adding some more colours to the walkbehind area though, maybe some dark green or blue on the parts that are leaves and grass, nice work.

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Darth Mandarb

Excellent beginning here!

I agree with what Boyd said.

Also, the grass on the right side of the screen (to the right of the beach) is blurry.  The rest of the image seems to be pixelized but that part looks blurry and it jumped out at me right away!

That could just be because of JPG compression??

But a great start!

dm

cpage

thanks for posting the new one  
as I said before i really like it
i think you should animate the water tho

Paper Carnival

Very nice! It reminds me the first Monkey Island... sigh...

Anym

Neat! 8) But perhaps a very dark shade of green would be better than pitch black for the shadows in the foreground...?
I look just like Bobbin Threadbare.

Ghormak

I think that IS a very dark shade of green actually, but I agree that it could be a little lighter. Otherwise really good work. I especially like the water.
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DoorKnobHandle

I think its really great!

Very good work, Sim!!!!!!

Something of the best I've ever seen!

Domino

Really looks impressive i must say.

why is that large rock in the center giving me the middle finger?

good job!!

shawn  :)

earlwood

That is awesome! Why does it look like the grass has sand on it? Bah, What do I know, That is freaking awesome. Must have taken a while.

Sim

hehe, I didn't actually see like that when I drew it but you're right it looks like the middle finger.   Anyway, I added some blue to the walk-behind area and added in a few extra touches and it seemed to improve the look quite a bit, in fact looking at it now it could probably
use more blue.  Thanks for that.

cpage

I'm really impressed I love the changes good work
This is one of the best in a long time

Flippy_D

Spectacular water effects, man. It's all good.

Proskrito

its great!! i love the water, too. Did you make the pallete from scratch or took it from somewhere?? the water looks very FOA to me (which is good  :) )

the only thing that looks a bit strange to me is the transition between sand and the middle finger rock, and the sand and the vegetation (sp?),  seems a bit 'drastic', kind of artificial or so, but it might be just me, you know  ;)

i hope to see more backgrounds in this style!  :)

DoorKnobHandle

This transission is the only little thing, which could  be made better in this screen!

Go on! Make more "rooms" like this and create a game with this gfx-skillz!

Great! really!


magintz

wow, looks real perdy, very secluded, maybe a little animation of the waves coming in :D
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Jumper

I like your Pic, it's great drawn. i wish i could make pics like this. what i would do, is to make the dark foreground  look like plants in green, but very dark green. but most of all i like it :-)

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