Last Clown Standing comic sketches

[Creed Malay]

http://www.deviantart.com/view/9504998/

These are just something I was drawing last night. I'm thinking of doing a once or twice weekly web-comic  based on the "Last Clown Standing" thing I did for the February MAGS game, because it was fun to do, and people seemed to like it, and those seem like good reasons to ressurect an idea.
I wanted to do it in a style that was more "serious" than my normal comic stuff, but as I really have no formal art training apart from what I got at school about a decade ago, I'd apprechiate any feedback and tips. I think I'm doing okay, but I'm having problems with perspective on limbs, and making things seem "solid", I think.
The sillouette bit is just me playing around with my new pen., and is a different view of one of the scenes in the game. I think it looks kinda cool.

Cheers in advance....

Davy

[Phemar]

Hey very nice sketches, I like the diagonal one the best though. Good luck with your game!

oooh, edit sorry: good luck with your *project*, heh.

[Mephistophilis]

http://www.matazone.co.uk/animpages/halloween_special_2002.html

The Drawings reminded me of that, it's comical.