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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: fidodido on Tue 23/03/2004 20:17:15

Title: New female character
Post by: fidodido on Tue 23/03/2004 20:17:15
Here's a new character I created.

C&C is welcome.

(http://invis.free.anonymizer.com/http://liortamim.tripod.com/vgirl.png)
Title: Re:New female character
Post by: MrColossal on Tue 23/03/2004 20:19:59
wow! so different from Songo!

I like her, the only thing I would change is her feet, instead of standing straight out like that turn her feet in so they're more pointed at us.

also her abdomen on the right side goes farther than her hip allows but that's not too bad, it's a drawing and no one's perfect

i like it a lot
Title: Re:New female character
Post by: I eat butter on Wed 24/03/2004 10:05:16
I dont like it...Because it doesn't work.
Title: Re:New female character
Post by: Pet Terry on Wed 24/03/2004 14:34:18
That's really nice, you've improved much since Songo! Only thing I'd change is the feet as eric pointed out. You've got really nice style and you seem to improve all the time, so keep it up.
Title: Re:New female character
Post by: Erwin_Br on Wed 24/03/2004 17:40:23
Quote from: I eat butter on Wed 24/03/2004 10:05:16
I dont like it...Because it doesn't work.

Hmmm...

Well, I like it. Because it works  ::)

--Erwin
Title: Re:New female character
Post by: Chicky on Wed 24/03/2004 17:48:46
I really like it , reminds me of futurama

-OSC
Title: Re:New female character
Post by: loominous on Wed 24/03/2004 19:12:24
Some modifications:

(tried to stick to the style. not sure whether I succeeded or not)

(http://w1.872.telia.com/~u87210460/AGS/vgirl_mod1.gif)
Title: Re:New female character
Post by: fidodido on Thu 25/03/2004 02:49:32
Wow, that's a fantastic improvement over mine!

Her face is a lot more actual now, and I like the curl of her body.

Great work!