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Title: New Space Ship Background Up For C+C
Post by: cpage on Tue 01/06/2004 10:39:23
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/bu.png)
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/bu.png)

umm yeah just tell me what you guys think. I'm actually really pleased with it. ;D
Title: Re: New Space Ship Background Up For C+C
Post by: Sam. on Tue 01/06/2004 10:51:19
That really is good! My only comment would be that the door on the right is too bright. It doesn't really fit in witht the rest of the room, maybe make it a bit more grey?
Title: Re: New Space Ship Background Up For C+C
Post by: Mats Berglinn on Tue 01/06/2004 11:35:57
I like the background. All though it seems a bit too dark at the dark place (from the middle to farest left).

(off-topic: Chris, could you try contact me on the MSN or at least PM me?)
Title: Re: New Space Ship Background Up For C+C
Post by: Minimi on Tue 01/06/2004 12:40:59
It's not too dark i.m.o. It's perfect! Leave it! Just fix the black, and white door, with more detail, and you'll be finished!
Title: Re: New Space Ship Background Up For C+C
Post by: Chicky on Tue 01/06/2004 16:11:53
brilliant! make it so the floor passes on past the door and add detail to the white room and your done!

love the work, cant wait to see it on a game
Title: Re: New Space Ship Background Up For C+C
Post by: Andail on Tue 01/06/2004 20:43:17
contrary to Minimi, I think this background can be improved, even though it's already very good.
The only thing that bugs me is the lighting; it's seems pretty "filtered", which makes an unnatural contrast between different areas of the picture...

If you have a version of it without the lighting effects, I suggest you try and add shadows and highlights manually. The spotlight on the door seems pretty unnecessary to me, too.

Heck, I made an attempt. I think I've managed to balance the picture somewhat; at least incorporated the left part of it.

old:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/bu.png)

new:
(http://www.esseb.com/andail/buremake.png)
Title: Re: New Space Ship Background Up For C+C
Post by: Isegrim on Tue 01/06/2004 22:36:14
That's great!
I must say however, that the pic reminds me more of a cellar than of a space ship... The wall look IMO rather like concrete than like steel or plastics... I'd say the cracks in the walls are too irregular. Of a spaceship interior I expect a more tiled or paneled wall texture.
Title: Re: New Space Ship Background Up For C+C
Post by: RLacey on Tue 01/06/2004 23:24:03
Just remember to alter the colour of the doorway on the right hand side (which you changed from white to black) to fit whatever room is through the doorway in your game :)...

Other than that, it looks fine to me.
Title: Re: New Space Ship Background Up For C+C
Post by: Relight on Wed 02/06/2004 02:55:55
Nice! But when anyone shows me an interior, the first thing I think is... Though it's not so off as to detract from the overall impression.

(http://www.sylpher.com/relight/imghost/1.png)
Title: Re: New Space Ship Background Up For C+C
Post by: Phemar on Wed 02/06/2004 04:42:04

Yes, maybe the perspective was off, but it's not that notice-able...

The right door looks way to "unfinished".

To me the lighting looks a bit funny...