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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Daz on Fri 06/08/2004 11:11:49

Title: New style Background (features a small waterfall :P)
Post by: Daz on Fri 06/08/2004 11:11:49
Rightyho, here is an experimental Background I've been working on the past couple of days.

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v284/ragingmonkey/experiment46.png)

C+C?.

Thanks

-Daz
Title: Re: New style Background (features a small waterfall :P)
Post by: Ginny on Fri 06/08/2004 11:18:28
Looks great Daz ;).
I think the white highlights on the pool look a bit too thick in some places, and the two clouds look almost alike, but otherwise I like this style very much!

I particularly like the waterfall, and the other shadings aswell, on the stone wall especcially. I can't seem to figure out what the little green area under the plank and to the right of the fall is, i'd expect more stones there, unless it's grass growing on the stones.
The sun looks good, not the cliche sun I sometimes use :P.
Title: Re: New style Background (features a small waterfall :P)
Post by: mousemat on Fri 06/08/2004 11:19:04
cool looks nice it would look even better if you animated the water ;)
Title: Re: New style Background (features a small waterfall :P)
Post by: nickeedoo on Fri 06/08/2004 11:32:26
I think that's fantastic!

I think you could solve the problem with the large reflection by using the same colour that you've used for the sky inbetween the white on the water maybe. ???

The clouds are great as is the sun. Perhaps the rocks look a little flat. ???

Not that I could do any better, mind ...
Title: Re: New style Background (features a small waterfall :P)
Post by: Chicky on Fri 06/08/2004 11:34:50
nice background, but when zoomed the smudge tool becomes quite obvious. I would suggest cleaning up the edges where smudge/blur has been used and maybe hand anti-alias the edges a little.
Title: Re: New style Background (features a small waterfall :P)
Post by: Daz on Fri 06/08/2004 11:46:25
Thanks everyone,

Ginny: The green bit under the bridge is the river bank on the other side, and ill make the white highlights on the pool thinner. Also i'll fix up the clouds ;).

Mousemat: The water would be animated if i were to use this Background for anything other than experimenting.

Nickeedoo: Thanks, i'll see how the water looks with the new hightlights and i will give the rocks a little attension.

Chicken: I will clean it up an give hand antialising a try.
Keep it coming.


Title: Re: New style Background (features a small waterfall :P)
Post by: YOke on Fri 06/08/2004 12:23:53
uh... where is the water coming from? it looks like it just appears from the highest point in it's surroundings. Just looks a bit weird.



To quote Matt Stone in the commentary track of "Cannibal! The Musical":

"Look! There's a river UP THERE! There's no river UP! That's just shitty thinking!" ;)
Title: Re: New style Background (features a small waterfall :P)
Post by: Daz on Fri 06/08/2004 12:40:25
Hehe i was too scared to say, i tried makeing it coming from somewhere but it looked abit strange.

I'll keep at it
Title: Re: New style Background (features a small waterfall :P)
Post by: Daz on Fri 06/08/2004 17:59:52
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v284/ragingmonkey/experiment54.png

New and hopefully improved.

added lots of stuff that are hopefully clear to you :P

The main thing is no more antialising and the river is coming from somwhere!

-Daz

[Edit] Tada! new sky and water.
Title: Re: New style Background (features a small waterfall :P)
Post by: Chicky on Fri 06/08/2004 18:29:20
Double post!!!




but well worth it! looks lovely, the sea could do with being a little more blue and same with the sky. Afterall remember water reflects the oxygen in the sky... or somthing like that.

So it should be near enough the same colour! Otherwise great bg.