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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Kaio on Fri 20/02/2009 15:55:47

Title: Newspaper Indy Sprite
Post by: Kaio on Fri 20/02/2009 15:55:47
Hi all! I did a little Newspaper-Sprite for the news-section of the Secret of Pandora Indiana Jones page. I just wanted to get some constructive critism about it :).
Here it is:
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a147/kaio89/news.png)

Also check http://secretofpandora.org/pandora/index.php?cat=02&l=eng for the animated version (which I didn't post here, because it consists of 2 layers and I was to lazy to add both to one animation :P)

greetz, kaio
Title: Re: Newspaper Indy Sprite
Post by: poc301 on Fri 20/02/2009 16:07:08
That is really really amazing.  I envy you sprite-artist types..  It is so difficult yet you guys make it look so natural.

Kudos on a nicely done sprite.  I like the animated one too :)

-Bill
Title: Re: Newspaper Indy Sprite
Post by: Shane 'ProgZmax' Stevens on Fri 20/02/2009 16:12:56
Cute!  The contrast could be lightened a bit since you've got it on such a bright yellow background, but aside from that and some pixel blockiness in spots I think it's great.
Title: Re: Newspaper Indy Sprite
Post by: rbaleksandar on Fri 20/02/2009 17:11:27
Very very nice. But there's something small that bothers me. Indy looks in a point above the newspaper. This is not a problem for the still version of you image, but in the animation it's obvious that he isn't reading the newspaper and just turining over its pages. Maybe it's a disguise? If yes, then there's no problem. But if it's a normal day (as if Indy can knows what this means, he ;D) and Indy's just sitting on this cute statue, reading the daily news, then it's a problem.
Title: Re: Newspaper Indy Sprite
Post by: Trent R on Fri 20/02/2009 23:28:58
I'm with unpronounceable-name. Even if it is just a ruse, he should look down occasionally.

But it is a great looking piece of work.

~Trent