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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: King_Crimson on Wed 25/06/2003 14:46:00

Title: not bed, but room with bed for c&c
Post by: King_Crimson on Wed 25/06/2003 14:46:00
hi, im making a room, and the most difficult thing for me is the bed. what do you think of it? any suggestions? thanks

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/bett.gif)
Title: Re:bed for c&c (a short thread, i hope)
Post by: n3tgraph on Wed 25/06/2003 14:57:37
the bed is fine

I'm more concerned about the  black outlined room
Title: Re:bed for c&c (a short thread, i hope)
Post by: King_Crimson on Wed 25/06/2003 15:24:25
thats just for you for getting an impression of the room. the lines will not be black in the game
Title: Re:bed for c&c (a short thread, i hope)
Post by: SLaMgRInDeR on Wed 25/06/2003 16:11:45
looks great!
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Title: Re:bed for c&c (a short thread, i hope)
Post by: AndersM on Wed 25/06/2003 18:05:22
looks great, but it stands to far away from the non-existing back wall. And it would look even beter with a cute girl in it...
Title: Re:bed for c&c (a short thread, i hope)
Post by: D · Y · D · O on Wed 25/06/2003 18:52:03
Try removing the double pixels on the pillow, especially the one in the topleft corner.
Title: Re:bed for c&c (a short thread, i hope)
Post by: Neole on Thu 26/06/2003 12:13:48
No problems with the bed.
Title: Re:bed for c&c (a short thread, i hope) [finished]
Post by: Gilbert on Fri 27/06/2003 04:16:38
Actually I think the pillow maybe a bit too large, not much of problem there.
Title: Re:bed for c&c (a short thread, i hope) [finished]
Post by: JD on Fri 27/06/2003 11:43:44
great bed! but yeah, you should move it towards the back wall a little bit :)
Title: Re:bed for c&c (a short thread, i hope) [finished]
Post by: Nacho on Fri 27/06/2003 12:39:02
Hey! We should see the rest of the room for critisize the perspective. On the other hand, the sprite is ok, with little amont of pixels, great work.
Title: Re:bed for c&c (a short thread, i hope) [finished]
Post by: danny* on Fri 27/06/2003 12:51:21
it looks fine to me...... :) 8)
Title: Re:bed for c&c (a short thread, i hope) [finished]
Post by: King_Crimson on Fri 27/06/2003 13:38:25
ok, here is a picture of the room, but its far from finished. i also changed the bed a bit, because it seemed to be a little too small.

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/raum.gif)
Title: Re:bed for c&c (a short thread, i hope) [finished]
Post by: Neole on Fri 27/06/2003 20:25:05
Looks good. I liek the colors too. I think the small size of the far wall makes the room look big. In adventure games you usually dont have this much perspective. Check out any room screenshot from any old adventure game to see what i mean.
Title: Re:bed for c&c (a short thread, i hope) [finished]
Post by: King_Crimson on Fri 27/06/2003 21:40:50
i know what you mean, but i think, i'll do this room that big, because i'm too lazy to start all over again. i will try to make the other rooms smaller. thanks anyway
Title: Re:bed for c&c (a short thread, i hope) [finished]
Post by: Xadhoom on Sat 28/06/2003 20:59:08
Looks great so far. Looking forward to seeing some more furniture in there... ;D
Title: Re:not bed, but room with bed for c&c
Post by: King_Crimson on Sun 29/06/2003 10:17:33
now i'm gonna post about this room, and i will update it from time to time. give me your opinions

(http://www.typosophic.de/room.gif)

by the way, this chair is supposed to be that ugly, but if somethings wrong with the perspective, just tell me
Title: Re:not bed, but room with bed for c&c
Post by: AndersM on Sun 29/06/2003 15:04:04
The bed and the desk stands to far away from the back wall, now it looks like the caracter could walk behind them, but maybee it is supposed to be that way?
Title: Re:not bed, but room with bed for c&c
Post by: King_Crimson on Sun 29/06/2003 15:08:52
not really, but i think, its tolerable, isn't it?
Title: Re:not bed, but room with bed for c&c
Post by: Xadhoom on Sun 29/06/2003 15:43:45
Looks better and better, man. :) I gotta agree with MrMasse though. It does look like the bed and table stand at a distance to the back wall. Shouldn't be too hard to correct, just raise 'em up a few pixels and they're there.
Title: Re:not bed, but room with bed for c&c
Post by: Nacho on Sun 29/06/2003 21:35:33
Yes... raising teh bed is not a lot of work...
Title: Re:not bed, but room with bed for c&c
Post by: King_Crimson on Sun 29/06/2003 22:45:52
I edited the picture. better?
Title: Re:not bed, but room with bed for c&c
Post by: undergroundling on Mon 30/06/2003 03:30:18
Looks good to me.  I agree about the depth of the room though, it looks freakin' huge.  But other than that, great work.  I like the style of the character as well.

- Bryan

EDIT: Heh, I just noticed something weird.  It looks like his room is floating in space with all that starry sky out there.  Maybe adding a little ground/landscape would make it look more realistic.  Unless, of course, his room is actually floating in space.  In that case, the room looks fine  ;)

- Bryan
Title: Re:not bed, but room with bed for c&c
Post by: n3tgraph on Mon 30/06/2003 07:47:32
very nicely done, I like that carpet that way and the color use is good.

Only one color problem,
that chair hurts my eyes :o
Title: Re:not bed, but room with bed for c&c
Post by: SLaMgRInDeR on Mon 30/06/2003 21:37:39
phew, im very glad to hear that its sposed to be ugly, (ugggh, pink :( ) looks great, only the char maybe you should either make the back smaller or the bottom taller.
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