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Title: (not quite so japanese) house background
Post by: waffer on Sun 07/09/2003 15:43:31
This is my first background to my first game. The game takes place in japan but as you can see theres no obvious connection to japan. So here is what I want help with: I want the scene to look more japanese and I also want to add details, shadows, vegetation and maybe textures.
So please C&C my background and feel free to edit it!

--- Edited 06 Oct 2003, 22:42---
Here is a complete remake of my previous background (you can find the old one here
"http://www32.brinkster.com/oaklake/upload/egohouse.jpg"<-copy link).

(http://invis.free.anonymizer.com/http://www32.brinkster.com/oaklake/upload/house3copy.jpg)

C&C Please!!
Title: Re:(not quite so japanese) house background
Post by: 12431 on Sun 07/09/2003 16:52:48
I don't know why, but mountains remind me of japan. and transparent sliding doors
Title: Re:(not quite so japanese) house background
Post by: on Sun 07/09/2003 22:11:20
Im not quite sure but the houses look too "western"
try to make the roof look like a pagoda or something.
like this:

                 _____________                
               /                            \
           \_/_______________\_/    
               |XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX|
               |XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX|
              /-------------------------\
          \_/_________________\_/
             |XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX|
             |XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX|
Title: Re:(not quite so japanese) house background
Post by: on Sun 07/09/2003 22:14:30
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.........../..........................\
......\_/_______________\_/
.........|XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX|
.........|XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX|
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....\_/_________________\_/
.......|XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX|
.......|XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX|

Hope it looks better this time
Title: Re:(not quite so japanese) house background
Post by: Moresco on Sun 07/09/2003 23:02:45
Hey, your background looks great I think, but if you need some pointers I'll try to help out.  These links try to show the design of a traditional japanese home, but may not be exactly what you're looking for in the design.

Link #1 ::: Traditional Japanese Home 1 (http://www.designcommunity.com/postings/1047.html)
Link #2 ::: Traditional Japanese Home 2 (http://kokorocountryhouses.com/largenikko.asp)
Link #3 ::: Architecture 1 (http://www.swifty.com/apase/charlotte/@Ejh.html)
Link #4 ::: Architecture 2 (http://home.worldcom.ch/~negenter/412JapHouseFigE1.html)
Link #5 ::: Architecture 3 (http://www.kippo.or.jp/culture/build/beauty/naka_e.htm)


I hope all that helps & isn't at the same time overwhelming, just how I do my homework :)



EDIT: I added this image.  What I did is simply change the appearance of the house. It's no longer two story(not sure what a two story version would look like really), & I added the altered coloring, red bars around the building & the screen doors(or glass).  It's not really 3-d or whatever anymore but you get the idea. The wide look to the roofs, intricate designs in the roofing, lots of japanese-ish things around the setting.  That will really help to pull the viewer towards japan and away from a western point of view I think.

I've never been to japan, & I can read/write very well but have trouble speaking it. This is my best guess you could say.  Good luck! If you need more examples(photos of houses for example), let me know I can whip more up...

(http://www.flakquest.zapto.org/images/japhouse_edit.jpg)

This is for you Japanese Adventurer! :)
CrazyEnglish (http://www.flakquest.zapto.org/images/crazyenglish.jpg)
Title: Re:(not quite so japanese) house background
Post by: waffer on Mon 08/09/2003 12:30:37
Thanks Menaze for your beautiful art :D. And I agree it looks to western. Im going to change the roof.  And thanks Moresco for the links, I really like that crazyenglish.jpg.  ;) Maybe I will use that sign somewhere in the game.

But I still needs help with details, shadows, vegetation and textures.
Title: Re:(not quite so japanese) house background
Post by: Moresco on Wed 10/09/2003 02:33:10
Here's more scenery:

Japan photo 1 (http://phototravels.net/japan/photo-gallery/japanese-nature.html)
Japan photo 2 (http://www.worldwildlife.org/wildworld/profiles/photos/pa/pa0511a.html)

These photos will give you an idea. Not much there, and really only vegetationish stuff.  There's so much more to be found, use google & you can't go wrong.
Title: Re:(not quite so japanese) house background
Post by: waffer on Mon 06/10/2003 22:53:49
Remake!!
Well I didnt like the old one so heres the new one. It lack some detail but that will be added.
Title: Re:(not quite so japanese) house background
Post by: on Tue 07/10/2003 06:11:40
Howdy.. Just took a couple mins with your latest image to give you a possible sketch for the house..

(http://ragnarok.net/xack/preview/house.jpg)
tell me if you're interested in going this route, i'll send ya the outline to draw in
Title: Re:(not quite so japanese) house background
Post by: waffer on Tue 07/10/2003 16:24:39
Looks great Xackery. I like the roof, gives the house a more japanese look. Please send!
Title: Re:(not quite so japanese) house background
Post by: on Tue 07/10/2003 21:38:11
Note I didn't draw this, so don't give me credit. I just basically did a search for outlines of a house that seemed to match your pic and did some color selection and threshold tweaks to get the above image. PM'd ya.