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Title: one of my first backgrounds I share with the community
Post by: 12431 on Wed 27/08/2003 18:51:52
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/skyggelagt.JPG)

c&C WELCOME!
Title: Re:one of my first backgrounds I share with the community
Post by: Trapezoid on Wed 27/08/2003 19:31:32
Woah! That's awfully big. I don't think AGS supports that resolution. :)
Title: Re:one of my first backgrounds I share with the community
Post by: jason on Wed 27/08/2003 19:43:25
Hehe it does seem a little big!

Overall, I love it! It has a ton of detail.
One gripe though: instead of scribling fake
text on the menu, you should put readable
text on it and make up some funny names...
Title: Re:one of my first backgrounds I share with the community
Post by: on Wed 27/08/2003 23:52:13
I like it.  :)
Title: Re:one of my first backgrounds I share with the community
Post by: Bluke4x4 on Thu 28/08/2003 00:26:03
It looks good. Did you draw (w/pencil & paper) most of it? It looks like it.
Title: Re:one of my first backgrounds I share with the community
Post by: 12431 on Thu 28/08/2003 15:05:42
no, I drew most of it in paint, then I added effects, shading and other cool stuff with PSP and Photoimpact.

and I only make it big so i can add effects easily. I have a shrunken version of it to.

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/smaller_for_ya.JPG)
Title: Re:one of my first backgrounds I share with the community
Post by: misterx on Sat 30/08/2003 00:09:55
its great,
only thing that bothers me is the bricks that are showing, just doesnt look right....
Title: Re:one of my first backgrounds I share with the community
Post by: Moresco on Sat 30/08/2003 03:54:40
Hey that's amazing! If I had any skill such as this, I'd be somewhere already with my game. Heh.  I made a simple pencil style sketch of a house, road, stairs, etc... and as it turns out, my character is now GIANT sized.  :( Oops.
Title: Re:one of my first backgrounds I share with the community
Post by: on Sat 30/08/2003 23:18:55
newest version:

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/improved_a_little.JPG)
Title: Re:one of my first backgrounds I share with the community
Post by: OneThinkingGal and ._. on Sun 31/08/2003 15:09:22
It looks like you're using textures in PSP or maybe PS. eg Those bricks are just not in pespective. It would look a lot better if you did them by hand.

Overall composition is good, but the colouring is just too patterny. Maybe you could stick to the brush tool and keep off the textures and gradients.
Title: Re:one of my first backgrounds I share with the community
Post by: makri on Mon 01/09/2003 10:28:39
I'd recommend doing some basic perspective study and maybe using a perspective "wireframe" drawn on one layer with vanishing point(s) to get it look right.
Title: Re:one of my first backgrounds I share with the community
Post by: Bluke4x4 on Mon 01/09/2003 20:16:29
Heheh... funny sign....
Title: Re:one of my first backgrounds I share with the community
Post by: 12431 on Wed 03/09/2003 19:56:07
it might be a little off perspective... but I'm satisfied with the result. and a little of perspective is cool