Deck of the villan's ship

[JimmyShelter]

I changed the stands for the cannon and added the grate for the cargohold. Does those look correct?

The perpective of the grate is off. The top is parallel with the bottom, while it should be poting towards the vanishing point.

[Khris]

krismuc: I do have some shading. How could you miss that? They are right there!

I never said anything about (missing) shading.

On to the pic: Why don't you use guidelines? At least for ONCE?
Every parallel line goes through the vanishing point (red) - is that so hard to manage?
I start to feel like talking to a wall.


The cannons legs were almost ok before you changed them, they are almost parallel, as their vp is way off to the right.

[Mats Berglinn]

Why don't you use guidelines? At least for ONCE?

That was unnecessary said. I DO use them, just not ALL the time, but I DO use the guidlines, so please, stop bugging me!

[Gilbert]

... so please, stop bugging me!

Heh but isn't this the reason why this forum is here?

Edit: I was bored so I made a quick edit on that grate.

In my opinion perspective is not very important as long as the background is easy to eyes, but that grate stands out oo obviously that it should either be fixed or removed (there're other problems such as the pole and the barrels looking so flat, but they're less awkward than the grate, the grate was so big that it didn't even fit into the opening), unless you're going for a weird wacky style (AKA horrible LSL1VGA style, which I don't feel you are).

[JimmyShelter]

Why don't you use guidelines? At least for ONCE?

That was unnecessary said. I DO use them, just not ALL the time, but I DO use the guidlines, so please, stop bugging me!

Well, you make the same mistake every edit, so yes, it is necessary. And if you don't want any criticism... don't post here.