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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: FSi++ on Sun 08/10/2006 18:13:34

Title: PI sprite
Post by: FSi++ on Sun 08/10/2006 18:13:34
I know, I really suck at graphics...
I also know that this thing can be improved...
Just don't know how.
Just look:
2x(http://www.ljplus.ru/img/f/s/fsi/jgreen.gif)
Is he manly enough?
And there's something with his eyes for sure...
p.s.
I also made a walkcycle (which also sucks).
2x(http://www.ljplus.ru/img/f/s/fsi/jgreen_walk.gif)
Title: Re: PI sprite
Post by: Buckethead on Sun 08/10/2006 18:41:03
first of all. He it looks a bit like he's wearing lipstick. For the rest I find the sprite pretty much ok. Yet the walk cycle has many flaws:

- His head bounces up and down. It might be better if the head doesn't move at all.
- His arms and legs don't bend while walking.
- Hi also walks kinda fast but that might be cause by the number of frames.

good luck!
Title: Re: PI sprite
Post by: i k a r i on Sun 08/10/2006 19:28:50
Also in my opinion..
He's got a (too) shiny skin, wich is not very manly, add some scars or less shine =P, and some beard..
Title: Re: PI sprite
Post by: Coolio on Mon 09/10/2006 07:17:55
I think you need to make his whole body bob up and down rather than just he's head. It would look more like he is actually walking that way.
Title: Re: PI sprite
Post by: OuchMyTentacle79 on Mon 09/10/2006 07:49:19
I have to agree with the others,his breasts need more bouce.
cool sprite tho,looks like a P.I. to me.
Title: Re: PI sprite
Post by: eddie hitler on Mon 09/10/2006 09:57:04
His outline seems a bit inconsistent, his face and suit have the same colour outline, his hat has a different colour outline and his hands have no outline at all.I agree with all the previous posts, and think a chin edit would work wonders, just a couple of extra pixels here and there.Also, he looks a tad earless, Overall nice sprite though.