(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/pilot.gif) (http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/pilot2.png) - (http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/pilot3.png) (http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/pilot4.png)
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/pilot.gif) (http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/pilot2.png) - (http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/pilot3.png) (http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/pilot4.png)
Looking for some C&C, suggestions, etc. I can't seem to get the boots and hands to look right.
EDIT: Added version without helmet/gloves.
EDIT: Updated w/ new version.
Looks great! I think the hands are guite good but the boots needs some work.
Try to make the bottom of the boots more darker.
And the head is quite good but looks like its not symmetric (is that a word?). Remember from scholl where the teached that face is symmetric. Otherwise looking good!
It's looking pretty good. The boots need to angle in a more diagonal direction I think. At the moment they look like they are at rigt angles, but he is standing face on. So you can either twist the body, or twist the legs to make it look more of a natural stance.
The hands look good, but I think the head is a *tiny* bit too small. I don't know, maybe the guy has a small head, maybe It's just my eyes.
Here's an updated version:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/pilot3.png) (http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/pilot4.png)
I made his head a little bigger (I'd already done that a couple of times, but this time I think it's finally big enough), changed the face a bit (though now it's less symmetrical than before, heh), changed his hands a tiny bit (added 1 pixel), and the big one, changed his boot to more of a diagonal. It still looks kind of wrong, but I've been messing with it and it just doesn't want to look right.
It's really close... I like the style, reminds me of Codename: ICEMAN. :)
Hmm... never played Codename: ICEMAN, though I have a few characters from it from juncmodule's site. It's actually based on Indy (in his suit) from FOA, though about 1.5 times bigger... in fact the face is almost the same..
Ok, his head is a lot better now. I made an edit to try and fix up the boots... See if you like it:
Yours
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/pilot4.png)
edit
(http://invis.free.anonymizer.com/http://au.internations.net/josh/pilot4_edit(auhsor).png)
And mine seems darker. It's probably what PSP did to it.
Hey nice character! :)
you might want to try some darker outlines on the pants and jacket, could work well!
I'd show you how if I wasn't at school :-\
anyway, nice going