Adventure Game Studio

Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Flippy_D on Wed 13/04/2005 17:47:48

Title: Pizza.
Post by: Flippy_D on Wed 13/04/2005 17:47:48
Italia.mid (http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/ITALIA.MID) made for the competition over in t'other board.
Title: Re: Pizza.
Post by: Daniël Brooks on Wed 13/04/2005 22:58:58
I like it; it's quite atmospherical.

I would soften the volume of the staccato guitar a bit, I guess...

Keep it up! :D
Title: Re: Pizza.
Post by: Sluggo on Thu 14/04/2005 04:05:32
I like it too. This is merely a suggestion, but when I have heard tremolo guitar passages like that it is usually carried out throughout the entire melodic line, although it might get annoying after awhile. Maybe if you just continue it until the next note change, instead of resting on the 3rd beat of the measure.
Title: Re: Pizza.
Post by: Phemar on Thu 14/04/2005 05:25:52

I like it.
Title: Re: Pizza.
Post by: Gregjazz on Thu 14/04/2005 06:07:39
Yeah, try messing around with the dynamics as well as the overall mixing.
Title: Re: Pizza.
Post by: Flippy_D on Thu 14/04/2005 12:24:38
Yeah, it's not as good as I'd like, but it becomes tricky...

Anyway. Regarding continuing the tremelo, I know exactly what you mean, but I had lifted so many ideas from the few classical guitar tracks I know that I was becoming worried I'd have nothing of my own in there - hence the not-quite-genuine feel (it's more like a lullaby, as someone said).

Ta for feedback.
Title: Re: Pizza.
Post by: Pet Terry on Sat 16/04/2005 15:29:06
You know, I've heard quite a lot of your tunes and I must say many of your tunes sound like they are made for a Snes-RPG. If I was to make a Terranigma/Chrono Trigger-type RPG I know who I would ask to make music for it.

As for this tune, it is like straight from from Terranigma and that's enough to make me happy. In other words, excellent, I don't find anything wrong with it.

If you want to try and improve it though you could try panning the instruments a bit.

Awesome, keep composing, I will be listening your tunes.
Title: Re: Pizza.
Post by: Flippy_D on Sat 16/04/2005 22:49:30
Super. Now I really do have to play Terrawhatsit sometime. I've heard it too often to not have any info on it! :P