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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Ytterbium on Tue 04/11/2003 20:53:48

Title: Please give me feedback on this sprite
Post by: Ytterbium on Tue 04/11/2003 20:53:48
I just finished one frame of the sprite for the playable character in my game. Here's a screenshot of him, with Roger Eco for comparison size. What does everyone think? Good, bad, too colorful, unrealistic?

(http://members.aol.com/greenmonkey824/images/screenshot.jpg)
Title: Re:Please give me feedback on this sprite. (MODS, PLEASE MOVE TO CRITIC'S LOUNG
Post by: Privateer Puddin' on Tue 04/11/2003 21:04:44
im not a good artisté but one thing i do notice, the arms should be different, seeing the side of them, not the front of them.. if you see what i mean
Title: Re:Please give me feedback on this sprite. (MODS, PLEASE MOVE TO CRITIC'S LOUNG
Post by: Ytterbium on Tue 04/11/2003 21:06:25
He's actually standing with the back of his hands facing forward. Some people do that.
Title: Re:Please give me feedback on this sprite
Post by: Andail on Tue 04/11/2003 22:20:39
yeah, but do as Custard says and change the arms, and behold the improvement.
Title: Re:Please give me feedback on this sprite
Post by: kaaZ on Tue 04/11/2003 23:55:23
There's hardly any shading on that dude...he look pretty flat now...agree on the arms as well....
There's an enormous space between his body and his arms...some people do stand like your sprite does I myself find it extremely uncomfortable/unnatural to take a pose like that...I would advise to have a look at real people and their postures.