Poem for the end of the game when the character dies

Started by Sinitrena, Sat 05/06/2004 22:48:52

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Isegrim

Both Sinitrena's and Auhsor's version sound great to me!
The only minor point of criticism I have with Auhsor's is that the second line doesn't fit in the rhythm too well.
But I'd still even prefer it to yours, Sinitrena...
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