hi res stuff from Lo_Res_Man [modified]

[lo_res_man]

This pic I drew in paint after sketching it out on paper,
she was born and grew up on ol' Luna but left when the neutrality got to her, prone to mood swings and extreme opinions, she has rejected the zen based society of her home-world. she still has the stretched out look the lunarites are known for, but without their calm grace.
So what you all think? do I convey what the above statement in the picture, or is the description bogus?
Any Criticism or paintovers are welcome.

[He-Man]

It is very good. It's got a lot of Monkey Island 3 feel to it.
Her face is a little masculin but that might just be the hair.
I assume she is walking otherwise the pose is a little strange...

[Mr Flibble]

I'd suggest making her nose smaller to make her look more feminine, otherwise, great work!

[Darth Mandarb]

It has a lot of character!  Good job.

Her left breast seems much bigger (sagging more?) than the other ... it gives the upper torso a sligthly "warped" look sitting right next to the extruded rib cage as it is.

Other than that I like it a lot.  Love the long neck!

[lo_res_man]

Thanks all, I'll work on her figure and hope to get some kind of workover, soon.
thanks all, any more critics on the stance, she is emnt to be standing on some stairs with one foot on the next step, to give her a dynamic, unbalanced look.
thabks all, and any more critiques are of course welcome

[lo_res_man]

oy! heres a edit I did of yonder sprite, if it pleaseth the cricics, may the thell me hats worng with it, and how I can improve, thanks a bunch!