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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: prowler on Fri 06/04/2007 15:20:17

Title: protagonist sprite, desperate for critique
Post by: prowler on Fri 06/04/2007 15:20:17
i've been working on this 640res character for some days now, here's what i've got so far

(http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/2994/introqe1.jpg)1x (http://img479.imageshack.us/img479/4307/introuz2.jpg) 2x

i find per-pixel-editing much harder than drawing backgrounds, i'd appreciate any advice and criticisms you may have to offer :)

btw, he's supposed to be an ugly dwarf with a scar on his face.. not sure if i made him ugly and dwarfish enough  :-\
Title: Re: protagonist sprite, desperate for critique
Post by: Medical Waste on Fri 06/04/2007 19:30:38
The scar is much too red, it looks more like a cut.
Title: Re: protagonist sprite, desperate for critique
Post by: Sparky on Sat 07/04/2007 00:31:20
Is it because he's incomplete that parts of him are lit, while other parts like the shirt have two color levels and only the slightest hint of lighting?

Regarding his proportions, I think he could stand to be a little chunkier.
Title: Re: protagonist sprite, desperate for critique
Post by: Chicky on Sat 07/04/2007 01:58:31
Here's my attempt at an edit.

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v54/oversizedchicken/edit-1.png)

2x

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v54/oversizedchicken/edit-1.png)
Title: Re: protagonist sprite, desperate for critique
Post by: Steel Drummer on Sat 07/04/2007 02:18:16
:D His head is way off-center. I like the face better though.
Title: Re: protagonist sprite, desperate for critique
Post by: Chicky on Sat 07/04/2007 02:42:01
Hah, yeah i forgot to move it back.

Too lazy now  :=
Title: Re: protagonist sprite, desperate for critique
Post by: prowler on Sat 07/04/2007 16:38:13
nice edit, chicky.. it gives me a good idea on where to take the pic :)

@medical waste - you're right, i'll change it
@sparky - well, i used the broken sword character sprite as a reference - that one has 3 colors for the face, but just 2 for the jacket... i figured i can play around with another shade on the jacket once i finish animating it.

thanks for the input everyone :-*