(http://geocities.com/standalonegames/yuuki_idle.PNG)
This is the main character for my game The Quest for Flamel's Stone.
I think he looks pretty good, but any help'd be great!
You should probably take the spaces away from the image thing... but since i'm here:
(http://www.geocities.com/standalonegames/yuuki.JPG)
I was about to say his legs are too short - they aint. His hands and torso are too long. And he has no neck.
Here is a reaaly quick remake to give you some ideas:
(http://img481.imageshack.us/img481/7159/ergos9rg.png)
Uh, really, guys, learn some basic stuff about human proportions.
Also he looks like noone. He has no personallyty, no nothing. I mean if u see Bernard from DOTTA u think - Nerd&Loser. If u see Ben Trottle u see some big bad guy. Try thinking what this guy is and how u can show it.
yea, I was really goin for a 'baggy' appearance, but you're right, arms shouldn't be baggy, it's just not right