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Title: Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: Ishmael on Mon 19/05/2003 15:01:55
So here we are:

Here is the newest version:
(http://kotisivu.mtv3.fi/tk/rawenorth_v3.gif)

Here you can see the older versions
http://kotisivu.mtv3.fi/tk/rawenorth.gif
http://kotisivu.mtv3.fi/tk/rawenorth_v2.gif

And it is VERY UNFINISHED, so dont give commentary about shades, outlines etc yet. Just the look of it.
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished! * Edited version adde
Post by: Ali on Mon 19/05/2003 17:13:47
Now that's one blue spikey feller you don't want to meet on a dark night!

Or even during the day.
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: Ishmael on Tue 20/05/2003 11:40:42
oh man it cant be this scary...
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: Ishmael on Wed 21/05/2003 14:01:12
Excuse me, people, but I'd like to hear other opinions too... any chance?
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: n3tgraph on Wed 21/05/2003 14:19:52
if you want some critics, I'd say you finish the picture first, it now looks like a crow putting his hands through a big cardboard. You can't even see his body :S
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: Ishmael on Wed 21/05/2003 14:30:38
Thats the whole point! It is a ghost-like creature with a floating head, a cape attached to it, and two floating hands with three sharp claws! I knew I'd have shaded it...
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: Jimi on Wed 21/05/2003 14:34:14
I think you should make it look more ghosty then. Maybe change the sheet so it isn't just a solid colour.
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: n3tgraph on Wed 21/05/2003 15:07:17
make it more transparent or something :)
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: Synthetique on Wed 21/05/2003 16:18:15
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/rawenorth_v99.gif)

just a quick look at the potential future..
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: Ishmael on Wed 21/05/2003 18:31:31
MAN!  :o :o :o TAHTS AWSOME!!! Maby you draw it for me?
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: n3tgraph on Wed 21/05/2003 19:09:58
well you could use it now 8)
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: Ishmael on Wed 21/05/2003 19:13:14
I cant draw that well... But that style wont nesecery fit my game... I'll have a thought about this (is that a proper Eghlish phase?) and see what I can get done with the picture... Thanks everyone!
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: Synthetique on Wed 21/05/2003 19:26:32
well.. if you dont need him animated, then just grab that pic..
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: SLaMgRInDeR on Wed 21/05/2003 20:24:13
looking good, but you could improve it by making the cape more cape like, rather that a full square,(that would help with the hands not looking like they were coming through the cape, the eye looks a bit strange and the things around the floating hands would look kool if they were whispy, maybe something like this...?
(http://www.angelfire.com/ultra/slamgrinder/Rawenorth_edit.jpg)
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Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: Synthetique on Wed 21/05/2003 20:28:11
its windy magic making the cape float like that.. if im not totally stupid--
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: SLaMgRInDeR on Wed 21/05/2003 20:37:55
oh, so the cape isnt actually sposed to be attached to the head?
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Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: Synthetique on Wed 21/05/2003 21:52:46
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/raven.jpg)
hasty work... but u get the pic..
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: Ishmael on Thu 22/05/2003 09:43:29
Synthetique: Ok.... Im stunned....   ::)

SLaMgRInDeR: I was after that style, but I ended up with what you see...

The cape is supposet to float behind him, like he would be invisible, but I must see that again... Thanks alot all of you allrady!
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: Andail on Thu 22/05/2003 11:50:33
As much as the effects on Synthetique's image are pretty cool, I doubt it will suit as a character in a game...how will it be animated? How will it walk around in a room?
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: Ishmael on Thu 22/05/2003 12:51:36
It floats around and casts spells towards the player.
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: SLaMgRInDeR on Thu 22/05/2003 16:17:36
eh? in an adventure game? i didnt think adventure games had things like bosses or battles in.
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Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: Synthetique on Thu 22/05/2003 16:21:09
no such rules...
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: SLaMgRInDeR on Thu 22/05/2003 16:45:52
i didnt say it was a rule, i just thought it would be a bit strange having an action game in an adventure game and hard to make in ags.
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Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: Ishmael on Fri 23/05/2003 13:08:50
Its an adventure game with like three fighting scenes (unless I fiddle the plot again), and I dont think they are hard to make. Its just that you move the player char left and right with the left and right arrows, and shoot your own spells with CTRL or somthing. Just need ot check the player position and make the boss shoot the spell towards that location... not so hard in theory.
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: Eggie on Fri 23/05/2003 15:30:57
Coolness. Do a nice, smooth animation for the cape and it'll look really classy.
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: Ishmael on Fri 23/05/2003 16:06:56
Im working on it, too bad I cant bring it here yet, coz my internet computers disk drive is broken :( (Im so old-style, that I move my pics form my laptop, on which I make my games, with 3½" disks to my internetcomputer ;D)
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: AJA on Fri 23/05/2003 16:44:01
I'd say that you should try to make the cape a bit more realistic-looking. Otherwise it's very nice. . . . . . . . .yeah that's all.
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: Ishmael on Tue 03/06/2003 11:21:33
I have the next "version" allmost ready, just waiting unitl I finaly get that bloody null-modem cable.... It only lacks the capes shadows and final animating...
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: Synthetique on Tue 03/06/2003 12:55:12
show us!
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: n3tgraph on Wed 04/06/2003 08:22:46
go for a utp/coax network instead

null modem is slow and sux :)
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: Ishmael on Wed 04/06/2003 09:29:08
utp/coax? whats that? And from a laptop to a normal comp? I prefer the null modem for multiplayer gaming as well... anyway I'm going to get an ADSL link to the laptop sometime, so then I will for sure show you all what I have done during this "information brake"...
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: n3tgraph on Wed 04/06/2003 11:54:09
oh you DEFinitly need an UTP network

you could get a complete kit for 70 euros :)
Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: SLaMgRInDeR on Wed 04/06/2003 17:56:03
euros? but we havent changed ye-... oh, your from holland, sorry.
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Title: Re:Rawenorth -- the first boss in Ashrad. Very unfinished!
Post by: Ishmael on Sat 02/08/2003 12:47:17
I dumped the combat idea... ;D It'll be a puzzle to beat the thing, which I'll redraw maybe...